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Title: Between Me and Thee 12 Oct 2011 5:57 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I think he might be angry at first, but will attempt to reign in his temper as it was an honest mistake. Harry didn't invade Sev's privacy, like Harry did Snapes in OotP. Not with that purpose, to invade. Kudos.
Title: Never Say You Love Me 07 Oct 2011 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm anxious to see how Sev reacts to Harry seeing all this. Very good chapter, tho :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! Just posted a new chapter.
Title: Never Say You Love Me 07 Oct 2011 6:05 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, poor Sev! Still so uncertain about where he belongs and if he's worth anyone caring about him. I feel heartbroken for him. I hope he can stay with Hagrid over the summer.

    And I want to strangle Tobias for treating him like that.

    Author's Response: You can see what happens next now! Thanks for reading!
Title: Bring Me To Life 07 Oct 2011 5:59 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    You're doing a great job. This is a very realistic portrayal of an abused teen. I know, I've counseled many of them. Keep up the good work and I like how Hagrid uses "animal therapy" to help Severus and make him feel good.
    I love your chimera and your Hagrid!
Title: Silent Sorrow 07 Oct 2011 5:53 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant work! I'm feeling so bad for Severus. But I think Hagrid can help him.
Title: Nobody Cared 07 Oct 2011 5:38 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus! It's a terrible thing to feel so alone and depressed that you would wish to end it all. This is a powerful piece of work and is making me cry! Great job.
Title: Silent Sorrow 07 Oct 2011 3:27 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    You certainly know how to tug on the heartstrings with your writing! I found it difficult to imagine the mature Severus of BW as a suicidal youth, but you are bringing him to life, and Hagrid (with Fang's help) seems the perfect choice to help him deal with his feelings of anger and isolation. It's good to have Hagrid used as more than a comedy element too.(Just one tiny,tiny little niggle. You mention the smell of beef stew, then Hagrid talks of putting conies in the pot.)

    Author's Response: Thanks. My Hagrid is different from the book's portrayal of him, as I'm following the mentor angle that I used in Broken Wings.  In Two Hawks Hunting, Severus mentions that Hagrid did save his life when he was sixteen, and that's why he trusts him above all others.  So this is the full story.  Yes, when Severus wakes, he assumes that's beef stew he smells, the kid wouldn't know what a rabbit cooking smells like, Actually rabbit when cooked with tomato sauce and spices does smell like beef, though it doesn't taste like it.  It's more tender and it doesn't taste like chicken either, LOL! The taste is hard to describe, but if it's done right, it doesn't taste gamey.
Title: Bring Me To Life 06 Oct 2011 4:36 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that's so sad.

    I like how you delve into Snape's past. I hope that his future turned out better than his past. Did he adopt Harry and Draco/

    Good job with capturing the hurt and emotion that Snape must be feeling.

    Author's Response:

    No, in this series he only adopted Harry.  Draco lives with Narcissa at this time, since Lucius was killed by Severus during the final battle with Voldemort and company back in Two hawks Hunting.

    Severus's future did turn out better, as he's now Headmaster of Hogwarts, chosen by Albus after he stepped down. 

    Thanks for reviewing and I hope you'll like the new chapter I've posted.

Title: Silent Sorrow 06 Oct 2011 4:20 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my God. This is so sad. Poor Severus! I want to cry.

    Beautiful emotions Snapegirl.
Title: Nobody Cared 06 Oct 2011 4:04 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg. Poor Severus.

    How awful. I'm worried that Severus is going to find out that Harry invaded his privacy and be really angry.

    Good start Snapegirl.

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