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Title: Week 15 Plans 14 Oct 2012 11:47 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story! Only you should make Vince ´s mum older than Snape, as he is 31 in your previous chapter, and Penny is 18 or more, so if she is 30 she would have to give birth as 12 y.o.
Title: Week 15 Plans 12 Jun 2012 5:26 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor you, i hope your ribs are ok again
Title: Week 15 Plans 29 Apr 2012 5:19 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that your rib is healing up well, and that you are no longer in any pain from it. That happened to me about 8 years ago and I still remember how miserable it made me feel.

    I just realized that I referred to Greg Goyle instead of Vince Crabbe in my last review. Sorry about that. I don't know why I confuse them all the time. *wry grin*

    Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter very much on my re-read. While I hope that Harry will eventually come to accept Hadwyn's apologies for his assault on Severus, I can understand why he doesn't trust Hadwyn now.

    The Christmas holiday discussions were rather interesting. In particular, I'm intrigued by why Morag's mum is adamant that Morag's Grandmother shouldn't know about Morag being a witch. Will we find out eventually? And I'm also worrying about Sabrina's holiday with her Gran... There's definitely something going wrong there too.

    I like the idea of Hermes spending Christmas Eve with Severus and Harry. Mayhap Ron might end up having some of the holiday with them too? Too bad that he can't talk to Severus instead of McGonagle about things. McG irks me in how she seems to be wanting to push her own opinions on the kids she is "counseling" instead of being as objective as possible for them. I have a feeling that Ron is going to stop talking to her altogether at this rate.

    Harry and Sev are adorable with their discussion about celebrating Christmas--I hope that Severus has a really large stocking for himself, so that the "same size" will surprise Harry on Christmas morning. :)

    Thanks for taking the time to post this chapter, despite the discomfort that sitting at the computer caused you. I truly appreciate it and hope that you recover apace.

    Well done!
Title: Week 15 Plans 08 Mar 2012 4:44 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Firstly, I do hope that you heal up quickly! Secondly, I want to apologize for the dearth of reviews from me lately. It's not that I don't love this story, but because my RL has been insanely busy with all sorts of stressful changes going on over the past couple of months.

    I can't pick out any specific thing out of the last several chapters that I like better than anything else. You make this scenario believeable, and understandable. As I told you before, your Harry reminds me of my own autistic sons, and when I read this story, it's so good to feel like someone really understands what it is like as a caregiver to such special people.

    Oh, just to clarify things, the reviewer Dancingkatz is my twin sister and the nephews she mentioned in her first review are my boys. :)

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but don't feel like you have to torture yourself to get it out to us fast. Something as marvelous as this tale is definitely worth the wait!
Title: Week 15 Plans 07 Mar 2012 1:51 am
Reviewer: yesIam (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm. I am unsure how I feel about Hadwyn's response to Snape's revenge. I love the story though. It's already on my recommend list.
Title: Week 15 Plans 03 Mar 2012 9:31 pm
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Argh...poor Severus - I hope he and Hadwyn's relationship didn't suffer an ending. It would be a shame, and I strongly suspect that Severus was mourning that aspect of their relationship when Harry dragged him into the room. I also think that Severus was scard to possibly lose Harry over it as well. The tears were a mix of pain and relief, in my view. I wanted to hug Severus!

    I wonder how Hadwyn and the boys will reconcile later on? If ever? I really hope they do.

    I think that Hermes and Severus and Harry will have a lovely Christmas - I hope that Vince's Christmas is a safe one, and really hope his father doesn't come home during the holidays at the last minute. Otherwise, I think he'll have a quandry getting back to the school for safety reasons.

    Looking forward to the next chapter and hope you feel better soon!

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime
Title: Week 15 Plans 03 Mar 2012 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! I hope you're alright! How did that happen?

    But this certainly was a fantastic chapter as always and I enjoyed reading it!
Title: Week 15 Plans 03 Mar 2012 3:29 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    A lovely chapter.

    I hope your rib gets better soon .
Title: Week 15 Plans 03 Mar 2012 3:18 pm
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, *claps hands like a child* I loves Chrissymas stories...now I'm rubbing off from Harry, lols...
    Update soon!
Title: Week 15 Plans 03 Mar 2012 2:02 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Great installment! I'm glad someone confronted Severus about what he did to Dudley, as it just doesn't feel right. I hope they can do something to fix it.

    I *love* the plot with Hermes/Hermione! It's very interesting and well-thought-out, as of course is the rest of the story!

    Sorry to hear about your rib, I hope you feel better soon.

    Sita

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