I wonder if Poppy found out that Elizabeth Murphy was pregnant? If she lost the baby, I suppose Pomfrey will know soon if she doesn't already.
| Title: Week 20, Early Morning Trauma
| 24 Jul 2013 9:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Lo (Anonymous)
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Your story is incredibly engaging and wise. Made me laugh, cry and ponder. It was most thouhtful of you to describe these conversations as transcripts. I have never read something like that in fanfiction. Idea of multiple characters is working really well and reminds me why I loved potterverse in the first place. Many writers of fanfics forget how complex it is. You focused on relations between Houses, teachers and students and reflected them uniquely. Hannah, Sabrina, Justin even Filch and many others - they're like real people with real problems and are easy to identify with.
I hope Hermes will succed to change his physical gender and in the end everybody will aknowledge that. You give hints about somebody in his family abusing him sexually - I suspect it's his uncle who was mentioned and Hermes wasn't exactly fond of him. But from the way how magical world justified Vernon Dursley I'm sure you adress matter of punishment for Hermes' molesters as well.
I would like very much to know more of your story and read it further! Language you use made me look into dictionary quite often which is very good, some words I seen for the first time. If it was complete I'd probably try to translate your story into my native polish - only when you agree of course.
| Title: Week 20, Early Morning Trauma
| 25 Jun 2013 11:41 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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wow! It's good to see you updating after such a long time! I am very curious how things will develop now with the addition of miss hogwarts and the girl in goldie!
| Title: Week 20, Early Morning Trauma
| 24 Jun 2013 10:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for updating I was worried this story was not going to continue! A great chapter thank you
Long time no read...glad for an update hope all is well.
What does this mean...the ending...the baby concious inside the unicorn...more question...hope the next chapter will be soon;
| Title: Week 20, Early Morning Trauma
| 23 Jun 2013 8:33 pm
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| Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Anonymous)
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I hope you explain that last paragraph a bit more in the next chapter as it's a tad strange as it is.
Interesting twist. I ant wait to see where you go with this.
More soon please.
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