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On a side note; I never thought about Flitwick as anything other than a bubbly professor..I like that you make him feisty! It gives him depth! Author's Response: Well, I KNOW what happens next lol. The opening scene for the next chappie is written. *smiles* Hey, but don't worry. With one exception, I've been writing these chapters in 2-6 days.
I also loved the explanation of the tree dancing - and that Snape has rhythms too. :)) A couple favorites from this chappie: >Yes, I'm very proud of my smart little pup named Harry. H-A-R-R-Y, that spells proud. [He smiles gently].< Snape had me smiling and laughing here... And "Hermes" ROFL! I am happy that Hermione calls Harry a "brother" as her "family" - I wonder if Snape is part of that too, and she is hesitant to say so; it was looking that way to me for a minute there...and I did wonder - does Harry see her as a him, because she is so tough/tomboyish, or is it because he really doesn't know? Also enjoyed Ron helping Harry out too. Good for him! As ever, looking forward to more. :D Hugs and Love, Vanime
I really love that you have created such a unique story. And, I'm also really excited where Harry's magic is going to take him, I wonder if maybe he feels free-er with his 'non-school' (the tree dancing, feeling Severus' rhythms) because he's away from his family? Just a thought...anyway, I really cannot wait for the next part!
Seriously, it's so good! And I love how protective Severus is and how different Harry is :) Very nice! Please update soon!
I bet though, that if some of the students saw Harry doing that, they'd be less likely to pick on him, when they realize just how powerful he is. And poor Hermione! Maybe she'll get better soon tempermentally wise now that some of her treasured books are with her at Hogwarts. How mean her mother is! I'd be devestated if anyone ever did that to my books. :( Will Snape be Hermione's 'fessor too? I would love to see that! :P Hugs and Love, Vanime |
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