| Title: Week 4
| 08 Nov 2011 10:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh that was lovely Severus is so ptient with him giving the ressurences he needs thank you
| Title: Week 3
| 08 Nov 2011 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh the lst part was so sweet thank you
| Title: Week 2
| 08 Nov 2011 10:03 pm
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Love the interaction between harry and Severus especially when he falls asleep!
yay! finally caught up! i like this harry. good job!
Aww, Harry is adorable and very different from what we're used to seeing.
This story seems very different from your "Freaks Aren't Allowed" which by the way I most simply ADORE and have read like over 10 times :D
I'm looking forward to reading more plz update soon!
aawww that last sentence really made my day!
This truly brilliant: both the transcripts device, and the story being told through them...your characterizations are crisp and complex. Very engaging. Very well done - the best writing I've seen in quite a while. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Well done Severus. And I couldn't help but giggle at Minerva's wondering what he had done to Malfoy.
I also liked the other snakes reactions to Draco's confession and "attempt" at an apology. Maybe he'll eventually see what others already do and give a true apology sometime.
Lovely installment! That last line... aww.
Draco's an idiot, but I wish Snape would take a little time to think about Draco's background. His father certainly isn't the best role model, and in some ways he might be as damaged as Harry.
I really love how you include all those little plots in the transcripts! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: If everything keeps going well, it might be out sometime in the next few hours . . .
Doggone it all! The ending of this chapter made me get teary-eyed. Really it did!
First I was a bit choked up when Harry heared from Snape that Draco really did mean to hurt him and wasn't his friend. Then I started to chuckle a bit at the image of Harry playing duck and cover in Potions class.
Then the chuckle quickly turned to stinging eyes as Harry rambled on some more about his new family as he drifted back to sleep, safe in Snape's care.
Although there was small typo in this chapter when Harry is sniffling at the thought of being hurt by Draco. Snape: [He puts an hour around Harry's shoulders...]
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