Good chapter. All the food descriptions made me feel hungry and I've already eaten my lunch. Harry is so lucky that Snape is who he is.
Author's Response: Thanks! You know, you're not the first person to say that about my food descriptions. Maybe I should write for a food magazine. If you think that made you hungry, check out my latest chapter of Stormcaller and you can see what the Malfoys and their guests are having for dinner. And Harry really is lucky to have Snape as his godfather, because nobody else could fix the mess he's in.
I just love all the details about Peeves reentering the mortal world, rediscovering his long-lost senses, eating a fine breakfast. Then come the details about Harry amusing himself in the library, including his unwittingly reckless behavior in the Restricted Section. Finally, I loved the scene with Snape scrying Peeves. You've really put together a fabulous chapter here, and I'll look forward to reading the next one-- can't wait to see the confrontation between Snape and Peeves!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I had the hardest time getting this chapter done, and I felt like I sort of threw it together, so I'm glad you like it! I've also updated Stormcaller if you're reading that one.
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