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Reviews For The Haunting Charm
Title: Chapter 3 02 Nov 2011 10:23 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    This was an excellent and amazing story. The concept was very original, and I liked how the tension built as the tale moved along.

    But what I liked best of all was how Harry came to realize that his motives for creating the charm were wrong, and how he developed true concern for Snape once he realized just how horrible the effects were going to be in the end.

    The last couple of lines were priceless! Yes, I can just imagine how bad it would have been had Sirius stayed and become a ghost--or worse, a poltergeist like Peeves!

    Hmmm. Now I'm wondering what kind of effect that charm would have on Lucius Malfoy or even Voldemort himself.

    Well Done! :)

    Author's Response: *chuckles* I honestly didn't set out to write a morality tale, but that aspect grew out of the story itself, rather naturally since Harry is not an inherently unkind individual. It's funny you should mention the ending, since I originally had a different one planned-- those lines literally popped out of my pen as I wrote! I love it when a story takes on a life of its own! :-D // Thank you so much for taking the time to tell me all of the reasons you enjoyed my story-- I really appreciate it! (And yeah, it would DEFINITELY be interesting to cast the Haunting Charm on Voldemort & Company. Talk about a power the Dark Lord knows not...!!!)
Title: Chapter 3 02 Nov 2011 5:16 am
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute!

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for letting me know! ;-)
Title: Chapter 3 01 Nov 2011 1:19 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    You know, for a while there I thought Harry's 'experiment' would end in tragedy (the Astronomy Tower comes to mind)... and I couldn't help wondering how Harry (not to mention Dumbledore and Flitwick) would have been affected by that. I have to say, while Harry's idea was kind of malicious, he *is* only a teenager, after all... but Dumbledore and Flitwick deserve their own Haunting Charm for what they did, and to their colleague/friend, no less.
    Anyway, a great story for Halloween which I thoroughly enjoyed reading! Thank you very much!

    Author's Response: Hey, thank YOU for the review! Personally, I'd lay all the blame on Dumbledore, since Flitwick would have ended the Charm, if Dumbledore hadn't ordered him to let it play out as scheduled and to tell Harry the same. I came up with the idea for this story right after Halloween last year, and I'm thrilled to hear how much you enjoyed it, now that I finally got it written! Thanks for reading! :-)
Title: Chapter 1 01 Nov 2011 5:08 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Really great Shadow!

    Author's Response: Thanks, autumn! Glad you enjoyed the beginning! (Just wait till you get to Ch 2 ... And Ch 3!) Hee hee!
Title: Chapter 1 01 Nov 2011 2:19 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL, loving it! What a creative way for Harry to get back at Snape.

    Author's Response: That's what I love to hear! Definitely creative ... but this IS Harry, and his plans don't always go as planned! Hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story, and thanks for the review! :-)

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