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Title: Chapter 10: Return To Grimmald Place 24 Jan 2014 9:26 pm
Reviewer: kissama1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well the wording needs improvement, I have found that reading what you have written helps to see if it sounds like it flows smoothly. Also like half of the most exciting fanfiction stories seem to be this way.so there is always room for improvement just don't try to do it by getting rid of the best parts.
Title: Chapter 10: Return To Grimmald Place 05 Aug 2012 4:07 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice
Title: Chapter 10: Return To Grimmald Place 20 Nov 2011 6:56 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Did some seriously flame you? This late in the game? Wow.

    *shakes head to clear thoughts*

    I liked this chapter. Somehow I'm thinking the hat won't be able to resist putting him in Slytherin. Please do it so I can see his reaction when he realizes that you can't get everything the way you want it. Better yet, have it announce Slytherin before it even touches his head and I get the added bonus of seeing Sirius have a heart attack. *grins*

    I know I'm horrible. But Harry really does need more reigning in then Minnie can handle. Plus admit it, the kid is more manipulative then previously. Positively Slytherin.

    Author's Response:

    It's cool, I'm learning to ignore it a bit, still very annoying.

     Thanks for the idea about that, and even though I had already finished the chapter of the sorting I had to add it in. it was a great idea, and Sirius will have a 'mini' heart attack too lol. He is more Slytherin this time around but he has to be.

Title: Chapter 10: Return To Grimmald Place 20 Nov 2011 6:46 pm
Reviewer: EngProf (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! I am really enjoying it. Can't wait for the next chapter :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it and thanks for reviewing
Title: Chapter 10: Return To Grimmald Place 20 Nov 2011 4:24 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that was really cute. Harry is definitely showing a lot of Slytherin characteristics, in how he manipulated Remus. I think the mouth soaping is a good idea and it won't take Harry long to figure out that feak and soap are not something he wants.

    Author's Response:

    Yea he is, manipulating is such a harsh word though lol, I know, the taste of soap is gross

Title: Chapter 10: Return To Grimmald Place 20 Nov 2011 3:01 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'll try to update soon

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