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Reviews For Second Chances
Author's Response: Nope..hes just a friend of the family
In the last part were Severus and Sirius went to visit the Dursley's, you had written that Harry had been there for 11 years, but he wasn't. It was only 10 years. Harry got there when he was a year old, so if he was 11 years old, he would have been there for 10 years. It is an easy mistake, I see it a lot. I just wanted to let you know. If you have any questions, you know how to ask me. Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out...my mistake and I will..if you see any other mistakes..just review and I'll fix them
I like the story so far. Author's Response: Yes I know that...I'm sorry but your gonna have to be more clearer because I dont understand what you wanted..Did you want me to correct something or what? Gladyou like it though..
Author's Response: I will I;m uploading the Sorting chapter right now lol
And... Ignore the Hobbit. If you wish to write for fun, do so. Sure there area few mistakes. So what? There is not a piece in the fanfiction realm that doesn't have them. And, everything does not have to be by the books... It is fanfiction. FANfiction. Fiction written by fans to change as they please.... Anywho, happy writing:) looking forward to more. Author's Response: I'm trying but so far they done that to ALL my stories, I even took one down, I cant take this one down tho, that would be wrong lol. Anyways I'm glad you like and thanks for reviewing
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it |
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