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Title: Chapter 11: Return of Draco Malfoy 05 Aug 2012 4:54 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Is Sev Draco's godfather?

    Author's Response: Nope..hes just a friend of the family
Title: Chapter 11: Return of Draco Malfoy 30 Dec 2011 12:05 am
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed) [Report This]
    My Second review for this chapter, I know. But I didn't explain my last review very good.
    In the last part were Severus and Sirius went to visit the Dursley's, you had written that Harry had been there for 11 years, but he wasn't. It was only 10 years.
    Harry got there when he was a year old, so if he was 11 years old, he would have been there for 10 years.
    It is an easy mistake, I see it a lot. I just wanted to let you know.
    If you have any questions, you know how to ask me.

    Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out...my mistake and I will..if you see any other mistakes..just review and I'll fix them
Title: Chapter 11: Return of Draco Malfoy 29 Dec 2011 6:50 am
Reviewer: Ashlin_Raine (Signed) [Report This]
    I have one problem wih this chapter. Harry had been with the Dursley's for ten years, since he was sent to them at the age one.

    I like the story so far.

    Author's Response:

    Yes I know that...I'm sorry but your gonna have to be more clearer because I dont understand what you wanted..Did you want me to correct something or what?

    Gladyou like it though..

     

Title: Chapter 11: Return of Draco Malfoy 23 Nov 2011 2:56 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon

    Author's Response: I will I;m uploading the Sorting chapter right now lol
Title: Chapter 11: Return of Draco Malfoy 23 Nov 2011 10:39 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Looking forward to more:)

    And...

    Ignore the Hobbit. If you wish to write for fun, do so. Sure there area few mistakes. So what? There is not a piece in the fanfiction realm that doesn't have them.

    And, everything does not have to be by the books... It is fanfiction. FANfiction. Fiction written by fans to change as they please....

    Anywho, happy writing:) looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    I'm trying but so far they done that to ALL my stories, I even took one down, I cant take this one down tho, that would be wrong lol.

    Anyways I'm glad you like and thanks for reviewing

Title: Chapter 11: Return of Draco Malfoy 23 Nov 2011 8:53 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *kicks flamers kicking rocks* I hate flamers. Except for a few mechanics that are only noticable to someone whose been to Comp 1 and 2 in college, this was brilliantly written. Keep it up, please.

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it

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