| Title: Chapter 18: Returning Home
| 13 Sep 2015 10:23 am
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| Reviewer: Selena (Anonymous)
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Hi. This is brilliant! I can't wait for the next instalment. Keep it up. :)
| Title: Chapter 18: Returning Home
| 02 Jul 2014 1:38 am
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| Reviewer: Lara (Anonymous)
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Oh I loved it it was wonderful! Especially Harry's interactions with Severus,Remus and Sirius,I have a soft spot for comforty bits :)
| Title: Chapter 8: Return of the Marauders
| 26 Feb 2014 2:59 am
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| Reviewer: black fire (Anonymous)
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binded is not a word, just so you know
Author's Response: Technically it's a word, it's in the dictionary, and it states it's a past tensed word, however the correct word for it is bound. It sounds better, but it's a word
| Title: Chapter 18: Returning Home
| 22 Feb 2014 5:58 pm
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| Reviewer: boASHoks (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 10: Return To Grimmald Place
| 24 Jan 2014 9:26 pm
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| Reviewer: kissama1 (Anonymous)
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Well the wording needs improvement, I have found that reading what you have written helps to see if it sounds like it flows smoothly. Also like half of the most exciting fanfiction stories seem to be this way.so there is always room for improvement just don't try to do it by getting rid of the best parts.
| Title: Chapter 5: Return to Hogwarts
| 08 Nov 2013 6:15 am
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| Reviewer: Allison (Anonymous)
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I'm upset about how young harry is acting. When I was 11 I did not act like that and my childhood sucked too. He is acting more like my 3 year old niece.
| Title: Chapter 18: Returning Home
| 19 Jun 2013 2:08 am
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| Reviewer: Moony the Mature One ff (Anonymous)
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I really like this story though I would appreciate it if you wrote the rest of this series. You haven't abandoned this, have you?
Author's Response: I need to finish other stories before I write this series
| Title: Chapter 3: Return of Severus Snape
| 13 May 2013 9:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Furrina (Anonymous)
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O Hell! Harry is such a SNAKE! Slytherin!Harry FTW!!! :P
I LOVE his story! I reread it every chance I get! PLEASE write a sequal!
| Title: Chapter 18: Returning Home
| 02 Dec 2012 11:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Zaiferz (Anonymous)
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OMG THAT WAS AMAZING...there where only a few parts i had trouble with that i felt could have been better, but it was mostly just durring the beginning. After that though it become a very amazing pice that i can't wait to read more of.
PLEASE continue to make AMAZING things like this ok?
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