| Title: Unforseen Help
| 14 Feb 2014 9:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed)
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Although I find Draco's sudden protectivness a bit unbelievable, I really like the interaction between Harry and Severus. I always thought it odd that nobody really talked to Harry about all the people dying around him.
| Title: Unforseen Help
| 26 Oct 2013 8:25 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Severus Draconis Potter, you have talent in writing. No one could deny that. However, you are not good at the conclusion part of the plot diagram. No, I am not a flamer. Try to end the story in some way. How did Severus help? Did Harry get over that addiction of cutting himself? I know how hard that is to quit. I have done self mutilation before, and I know there is more than a soft-hearted man in black to help Harry stop that habit.
| Title: Unforseen Help
| 26 Oct 2013 8:20 am
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| Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous)
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Severus Draconis Potter, you have talent in writing. No one could deny that. However, you are not good at the conclusion part of the plot diagram. No, I am not a flamer. Try to end the story in some way. How did Severus help? Did Harry get over that addiction of cutting himself? I know how hard that is to quit. I have done self mutilation before, and I know there is more than a soft-hearted man in black to help Harry stop that habit.
| Title: Unforseen Help
| 26 Oct 2013 8:17 am
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| Reviewer: Syrine (Anonymous)
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Severus Draconis Potter, you have talent in writing. No one could deny that. However, you are not good at resolutions. No, I am not a flamer. Try to end the story in some way. How did Severus help? Did Harry get over that addiction of cutting himself? I know how hard that is to quit. I have done self mutilation before, and I know there is more than a soft-hearted man in black to help Harry quit that habit.
Great story!
Any chance for a sequel?? It makes mus want to see how severus will help on th road to the recovery!
Yea, its a pretty good story, thanks for reviewing
This is a rather endearing and angst filled story. I like the end where you get the feeling Harry has hope but still feels despair. In your mind, does Harry ever get better?
Author's Response: Yea he gets better, I'm a fan of Harry angst but, I also love semi/happy endings. I would think that Harry eventually learns to stop self harming, with Snapes help.
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