Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 12 Nov 2020 6:54 pm
Reviewer: Witchy_Clover (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahajdgdjdh yes
    I was a little eh on the scream he did when he pulled ron as sirius grabbed him but it may have been of fear ad well as pain bc there were visible bruises. That takes a bit of force to show up so fast so, yeah
    This is v interesting!! I cant wait to read the next chapters, i just wanted to get my thoughts out b4 i moved on
Title: Chapter 1 13 Apr 2016 6:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you not sure how I missed this wonderful start!
Title: Chapter 1 03 Oct 2015 2:32 am
Reviewer: woodyt (Signed) [Report This]
    This sounds like it will be a good story but I am very reluctant to start anything that is not finished, as the anticipation of waiting for an update is almost as bad as the frustration of starting something that will not be completed, so I will track it in the hope that it will be, sorry

    Author's Response: That's okay I do understand as I was a reader first. None of my stories will be abandoned
Title: Chapter 1 10 Aug 2012 10:28 am
Reviewer: Libitina (Signed) [Report This]
    I fell in love with this story after reading its first chapter! The conversation between Sirius and Harry could really happen in the book, too bad it didn't. Thank you so much for writing this story!
Title: Chapter 1 21 Nov 2011 10:33 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Sirius, could you get any more moronic?
    I think you did a great job with it, considering you're such a fan!

    Author's Response:

    Well, he was a Gryffindor..I sound like Sev lol. Thanks I'm glad it turned out ok, and thanks for reviewing

Title: Chapter 1 20 Nov 2011 5:37 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh god. Sev take care of him! I think he really needs you to figure out what is wrong with him. Come on, look beyond James and see your best friend's son! Save him!

    Author's Response:

    He will he will, lol. He will see Lily's son finally

Title: Chapter 1 20 Nov 2011 4:31 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great beginning!I can actually see Sirius reacting that way too! Great job in keeping everyone in character, and I loved how you had Harry's flashback play a major part in him and Prof.Snape's interaction! I really think that this could become an amazing Snape adopts Harry story or a Snape becoming Harry's guardian story too, just a thought. I really hope Harry does start to rely on Snape and in the process Sirius causes more problems because he is jealous. It would just be awesome to see Snape go head to head with Sirius!

    Author's Response: Thanks that was really a good idea you had..it will be in the story I promise you lol. I might have to not make this a two-shot though lol
Title: Chapter 1 20 Nov 2011 3:25 am
Reviewer: zalievana (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful beginning:) i felt that Harrys transition into trusting Severus might have been a little too quick, but overly I loved it. I want another chapter...and just to warn you, twoshot wont do...I wont a full story:) pleeease:):):)

    Author's Response: Lol we'll see, otherwise part two might be extrememly long. Oh and it seems like Harry was trusting Severus , and he does to an extent. But seeing as he doesnt trust any male adult not to hurt him, thats going to come into the light. In a sense he trusted Sev to get him out of there but he doesnt trust him not to hurt him. He knows the professor hates him, so hes scared of him..does that make sense? lol
Title: Chapter 1 19 Nov 2011 11:15 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it
Title: Chapter 1 19 Nov 2011 7:34 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Sirius too, even if he WAS an idiot at times :D.

    Poor Harry, he's going through a lot right now. I hope someone can get through to his godfather so the idiot can feel properly ashamed! Good thing Severus is there to help.

    Author's Response:

    Yea he was lol, he was like a little kid you no? I love how everyone is a Sev lover lol


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