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Reviews For Unforgiveable Sirius
I was a little eh on the scream he did when he pulled ron as sirius grabbed him but it may have been of fear ad well as pain bc there were visible bruises. That takes a bit of force to show up so fast so, yeah This is v interesting!! I cant wait to read the next chapters, i just wanted to get my thoughts out b4 i moved on
Author's Response: That's okay I do understand as I was a reader first. None of my stories will be abandoned
I think you did a great job with it, considering you're such a fan! Author's Response: Well, he was a Gryffindor..I sound like Sev lol. Thanks I'm glad it turned out ok, and thanks for reviewing
Author's Response: He will he will, lol. He will see Lily's son finally
Author's Response: Thanks that was really a good idea you had..it will be in the story I promise you lol. I might have to not make this a two-shot though lol
Author's Response: Lol we'll see, otherwise part two might be extrememly long. Oh and it seems like Harry was trusting Severus , and he does to an extent. But seeing as he doesnt trust any male adult not to hurt him, thats going to come into the light. In a sense he trusted Sev to get him out of there but he doesnt trust him not to hurt him. He knows the professor hates him, so hes scared of him..does that make sense? lol
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it
Poor Harry, he's going through a lot right now. I hope someone can get through to his godfather so the idiot can feel properly ashamed! Good thing Severus is there to help. Author's Response: Yea he was lol, he was like a little kid you no? I love how everyone is a Sev lover lol |
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