Love it, update soon
Author's Response: I'll try to thanks
this was well written. even though you said you really hate portraying padfoot in a mean light i think you did that very well here. i can't wait for the second half of the story.
Author's Response: I did, I felt so bad for Sirius even though you can kinda see him doing this type of thing anyway. Thanks though and I'm glad you liked it
wow.
Author's Response: lol Hoping thats a good wow lol
Oh wow, what an awesome beginning! I do hope you continue it soon. Way to go Ron, for once you did the right thing at the right time, woohoo!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I know I always hated that Ron was immature up until the last second, I actually liked him when he wasnt being a git lol and I'll try to update really soon
But there needs to be more!
Author's Response: Yea I'm making it a two shot, a part of teh challenge was to show the aftermath lol
Oh my goodness! This needs more, lawl! Kudos, a job well done :)
Author's Response: Yea I thought that too, I guess it'll be a two shot because I need to focus on the aftermath
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