Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 12 Nov 2020 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Witchy_Clover (Signed) [Report This]
    ... that was kind of manipulative wow

    Author's Response: It wasn't meant to be, unless you mean Albus then yeah that part was. there's no more abuse happening in this story so..try not to reach too much 
Title: Chapter 3 13 Apr 2016 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a good chapter
Title: Chapter 3 18 Mar 2013 8:19 am
Reviewer: txn (Signed) [Report This]
    Your characterization is good, but your grammatical errors keep me from really enjoying your story.

    The main one is the use of "your" and "you're."

    "Your" indicates ownership. You've used it correctly here: “Open your eyes wolf, of course he doesn’t want to stay here. Can you blame him?”

    "You're" is a contraction of "you" and "are." Here is an instance where you should have used "you're" instead of "your:" “As well as anyone can be I guess, he’s still scared if that’s what YOUR asking." It should be "you're" as in, "if that's what you're asking."
Title: Chapter 3 30 Nov 2011 7:25 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Ron is seeing it because Harry sure isn't. And with good reason! So will Sev be able to protect Harry from himself and from Sirius? Will he find out about Umbridge? More about the Dursleys?

    Author's Response:

    Yea he will, Harry is so out of his element here, that he has to learn to trust that Snape wont hurt him when he does something that the man doesnt like. Of course him and Albus are going to be furious about the lines on his hand. I have a plan for the Durselys too dont worry



    Author's Response:

    Yea he will, Harry is so out of his element here, that he has to learn to trust that Snape wont hurt him when he does something that the man doesnt like. Of course him and Albus are going to be furious about the lines on his hand. I have a plan for the Durselys too dont worry

Title: Chapter 3 30 Nov 2011 6:22 am
Reviewer: Lillielle (Signed) [Report This]
    Sirius really is an idiot, isn't he...he doesn't know his godson at all if he thinks Harry wouldn't have a problem with bullying.

    Almost want Sirius to try something crazy, like trying to kidnap Harry and give him Veritaserum or something, like "you must tell me the truth!" ..."you're a bully." XD

    Author's Response:

    Yea he really is lol, 'kidnap' his godson? You know that might work...maybe no truth serum tho lol

Title: Chapter 3 30 Nov 2011 2:10 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome! Knocked out twice in less than an hour, I love it!!! It's the very least he deserves and I hope both Albus and Harry get the chance to knock him out as well!

    Author's Response: I can really see Albus hitting him like that lol but who knows
Title: Chapter 3 30 Nov 2011 1:38 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how this story is going!

    Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it
Title: Chapter 3 29 Nov 2011 10:24 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Aaww, cute and brilliant chapter! I loved that you kept Snape in character while letting him act gently in the right moments. ^____^ hehe, and I cannot deny that I liked that Sirius was punched twice (although I generally like him). ^^

    Author's Response: I try...It needed some humor, and I love Sirius too but he deserved it lol
Title: Chapter 3 29 Nov 2011 10:15 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    awww Snape's already getting the hang of things I see I loved the way he handled that...
    I would really like to see a scene where Sirius overhears Harry talking about how great Snape is and how lucky he is to have him as a father/guardian. Sirius (typically) goes all crazy with jealousy and everything follows from there. I know that this scene will probably be better of later in the story but I just wanted to get it out there...Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Yea I will use this, but much later on in the story. Thanks for the idea

Title: Chapter 3 29 Nov 2011 9:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for n interesting story.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reading

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