Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 5 24 Jun 2020 10:47 pm
Reviewer: PhoenixFeathers (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay I don’t know if this is just me, but I swear I see that last part -from goodnight my child to the end- in so many fics that involve Snape taking Harry from somewhere and bringing him to his house/manor
    Not complaining
    Just trying to figure out if I’m being stupid but I swear I’ve read that almost exactly the same before 😂
Title: Chapter 5 13 Apr 2016 7:33 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very sweet and comforting thank you
Title: Chapter 5 03 May 2013 7:16 am
Reviewer: Christina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is amazing. I have a feeling I have read it on another site, but I am not certain where. Perhaps Fanfiction?
    Anyway, the way that you depict the relationship between Harry and Snape is very well done.
    The ending of this chapter was especially sweet.
Title: Chapter 5 28 Dec 2011 6:54 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    Aaaaawwwwe! That was great! I loved it! I hope there is a lot more of accidental magic with Harry and Snape! I also am hoping that Harry does turn out to be Snape's son, it would just be awesome~especially sincein this chapter they did have that goodnight exchange. I really also hope that there will be more Snape Vs Black oh and I cannot wait for Dumbledore to find out about the blood quill! Excellent job!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to add in more Snape and Sirius when I can
Title: Chapter 5 17 Dec 2011 6:31 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed) [Report This]
    awwwww
Title: Chapter 5 17 Dec 2011 2:31 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, that's sweet.
    Is it going to occur to Snape to ask Ron what happened to Harry's hand?

    Author's Response: Probably seeing as Harry freaked out, he would get the basics from Harry then more detailed from Ron
Title: Chapter 5 16 Dec 2011 11:35 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story. I believe the timeline is off for this chapter. It started at breakfast but when Harry runs from the room and goes to the Burrow, the Weasleys are having dinner. One paragraph states it had only been 15 minutes since he ran away from Snape. Then when they come home, Harry is put to bed for the evening. Therefore we went from breakfast to dinner in about 30 minute time frame.

    Again, I really like this story and I am looking forward to your next update.

    Author's Response: Ooh, thanks for catching that, I hadnt noticed...I'll try to keep it more consistent in the future Chapters. But I think I only messed the timeline in this chapter..thats what I get for writing instead of doing homework lol.
Title: Chapter 5 16 Dec 2011 10:52 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, sweetest chapter so far, please update soon I really want to read about Snape's apology!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'll try I...Sev apologise to Harry? The bane of his existent? lol Yea I'm looking forward to that too

Title: Chapter 5 15 Dec 2011 2:52 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon

    Author's Response: I will ASAP
Title: Chapter 5 15 Dec 2011 2:34 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Sev, what is it that all the Brit say.... ah yes.... 'Keep Calm and Carry on' until your in a safe place to show your anger. Talk to harry in a calm voice!

    *laughs* Good chapter, I especially loved the last bit. So I'm thinking Harry might need some counseling or at least talk to someone... maybe someone in the muggle world where he is unknown? He fits for crisis counseling.

    So if you can sneak in some more "my child"s and "dad"s I'd be most appreciative!

    Author's Response:

    Yea he needs to larn to control his temper...for Harry's sake at least. I'll think on that, and see what I can do...

     Of course I promise more little moments of sweetness and fluff when I can 


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