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Reviews For Unforgiveable Sirius
Not complaining Just trying to figure out if I’m being stupid but I swear I’ve read that almost exactly the same before 😂
Anyway, the way that you depict the relationship between Harry and Snape is very well done. The ending of this chapter was especially sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to add in more Snape and Sirius when I can
Is it going to occur to Snape to ask Ron what happened to Harry's hand? Author's Response: Probably seeing as Harry freaked out, he would get the basics from Harry then more detailed from Ron
Again, I really like this story and I am looking forward to your next update. Author's Response: Ooh, thanks for catching that, I hadnt noticed...I'll try to keep it more consistent in the future Chapters. But I think I only messed the timeline in this chapter..thats what I get for writing instead of doing homework lol.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try I...Sev apologise to Harry? The bane of his existent? lol Yea I'm looking forward to that too
Author's Response: I will ASAP
*laughs* Good chapter, I especially loved the last bit. So I'm thinking Harry might need some counseling or at least talk to someone... maybe someone in the muggle world where he is unknown? He fits for crisis counseling. So if you can sneak in some more "my child"s and "dad"s I'd be most appreciative! Author's Response: Yea he needs to larn to control his temper...for Harry's sake at least. I'll think on that, and see what I can do... Of course I promise more little moments of sweetness and fluff when I can |
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