Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 15 25 Jun 2020 6:37 pm
Reviewer: PhoenixFeathers (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh does that mean it’s gonna get sad😨 fuck


    Anyways
    RON CALLED UMBITCH UMBITCH, AND SNAPE PRACTICALLY LAUGHED (stfu I can’t remember what it said) -as he should because, come on, she’s a bitch-
Title: Chapter 15 13 Apr 2016 9:16 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter I love mad professors!
Title: Chapter 15 22 Jul 2013 1:56 am
Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the story for the most part. Great writing and a great plot line. The only thing that I don't like so far is that you say Minerva didn't know about the blood quill, but she did and she talked to Dolores about it. It happens in the book and the movie. Where they have a confrontation about leaving punishments up to heads of houses. Other than that I think that this is a super story and I love your writing!

    Author's Response: Oh....well I dont remember that part. *shrugs* It's fanfiction though...so it's allowed to hve mistakes, not to mention Canon completely flies out the window the majority of the time.  Glad you like it for the most part I guess.
Title: Chapter 15 01 Jun 2012 4:32 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    There, all caught up! So much for a one-shot, two+shot, 4-5 chapter, etc., eh? I'm glad! ;-)

    Author's Response: I know right, I was kidding myself lol...Sev and Harry had a mind of their own I'm glad you're enjoying it though.
Title: Chapter 15 31 May 2012 12:43 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    very good sev will get her in his own alibied way *S*

    Author's Response: Lol yes he will
Title: Chapter 15 31 May 2012 12:43 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    very good sev will get her in his own alibied way *S*
Title: Chapter 15 31 May 2012 2:52 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The scenes of Severus caring for the sick Harry were nicely done. They have come a long way in their relationship. It sounds like there won't be enough of Umbridge to pick up with a fork and a spoon when everyone is done with her. Looking forward to that chapter.
Title: Chapter 15 31 May 2012 2:07 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    I like where you are taking this. Really can't wait to see what Albus and Minerva will do to Umbridge. :)

    Poor Harry, wonder how he'll react when Snape tells him about what he really went to see Dumbledore about. Hopefully, it's all good! :)

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime
Title: Chapter 15 30 May 2012 10:11 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the bonding moments between Harry and Severus as well as Ron and Harry. Especially that last little part.

    Just a correction: "We have settled that have we not, I merely just need to ask Albus a question on his new grading scale"-That sentence is a comma splice.

    Author's Response:

    Yea it was cute..

     Thanks for that, its all corrected now.

Title: Chapter 15 30 May 2012 3:25 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Die Umbridge, die!

    I love protective Sev, he makes me smile. Good chapter, more please?

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