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Reviews For Unforgiveable Sirius
Anyways RON CALLED UMBITCH UMBITCH, AND SNAPE PRACTICALLY LAUGHED (stfu I can’t remember what it said) -as he should because, come on, she’s a bitch-
Author's Response: Oh....well I dont remember that part. *shrugs* It's fanfiction though...so it's allowed to hve mistakes, not to mention Canon completely flies out the window the majority of the time. Glad you like it for the most part I guess.
Author's Response: I know right, I was kidding myself lol...Sev and Harry had a mind of their own I'm glad you're enjoying it though.
Author's Response: Lol yes he will
Poor Harry, wonder how he'll react when Snape tells him about what he really went to see Dumbledore about. Hopefully, it's all good! :) Hugs and Love, Vanime
Just a correction: "We have settled that have we not, I merely just need to ask Albus a question on his new grading scale"-That sentence is a comma splice. Author's Response: Yea it was cute.. Thanks for that, its all corrected now.
I love protective Sev, he makes me smile. Good chapter, more please? |
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