Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 16 13 Apr 2016 9:34 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you very satisfying!
Title: Chapter 16 24 Sep 2012 3:31 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry never peed. This bothers me.

    Author's Response:

    He did...lol, but that seemed like a good place to stop the chapter...

Title: Chapter 16 14 Jun 2012 11:12 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    padfoot is crazy! go sev kick his ass. Yes I loved it more please...
Title: Chapter 16 14 Jun 2012 6:04 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how Sirius snuck into the bathroom? At least Severus took care of him. Oh, boy, Christmas chapter is coming up. I love Christmas chapters!

    Author's Response: I'll explain how he got pass next chapter when Harry asks Snape the same thing.
Title: Chapter 16 14 Jun 2012 5:31 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, the ending was sweet. I'm glad that Severus paid Sirius back for hurting Harry so but he certainly deserves much worse than that!

    Also, I do believe you mean "Snape's insistence" not "Snape’s instance". A few punctuational errors and such but nothing proofreading won't fix.

    Please do update again soon, I look forward to reading more!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah..my spell check is in auto correct mode...a poor excuse for a beta and it puts what it thinks I mean >.< lol. Anywho I'm glad your liking the story

Title: Chapter 16 13 Jun 2012 10:31 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Sirius is majorly stupid
    I hope Snape becomes Harry's guardian permanently.
Title: Chapter 16 12 Jun 2012 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Dixie Darlin (Signed) [Report This]
    "And you shall, right after she’s transfigured, poisoned, charmed, and entangled in Devil's snare,"

    ROFL, I can just see Umbridge once they're all done with her! There may not be much left for Dumbledore to do! :)

    Author's Response: I know right....she'll be all twitchy and everything  lol
Title: Chapter 16 12 Jun 2012 11:31 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Uhm...what happened to Harry having to go? Even if he got the fright of his life, his bladder should still be full and make itself known after the danger had passed. Still, I love your stories. And what d'you mean, not a happy story? If it is one where Harry ends up finding a father in Severus, then it is a happy story! :). You pay no attention to the flamers. You are a wonderful artist, and my only critique is some of your punctuation is off, and that is only a quirk of mine after having taken two semesters of Composition and one semester of Creative Writing. Kudos on the great chapters, and more please :)

    Author's Response:

    He still has to go...Adrenaline and such...though I wasnt aware I hadnt included it in this chapter. Its in the next one, I had to have a mini scene with them picking out the trees..lol..

    well its happy in the end..but some people want the happy now..thats not how it works lol Thanks though.

    Yea, I always seemed to miss things even if I double check the storie for errors. Anyways I'm glad you like it.

Title: Chapter 16 12 Jun 2012 3:29 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    How in the world did he get by Lupin, Tonks, and Severus? I cannot wait to see the tree being decorated! Very cute parts with Harry and Severus. I think it is time to chain Sirius somewhere and snap his wand.

    Poor Harry!

    Author's Response:

    They ate lunch during lunch hour..I was going for alot of people in one place...really easy for someone to slip pass Severus and Tonks...I would think that Sirius knows how to mask his scent and therefore throw off Moony.

    Harry would never allow tht, he loves Sirius...but yes I agree..

Title: Chapter 16 12 Jun 2012 1:57 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    good job... I love Sirius, but not here...so you are doing well

    Author's Response: Trust me..I love Padfoot as well..but not here...thanks so much :)

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