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Reviews For Unforgiveable Sirius
Author's Response: He did...lol, but that seemed like a good place to stop the chapter...
Author's Response: I'll explain how he got pass next chapter when Harry asks Snape the same thing.
Also, I do believe you mean "Snape's insistence" not "Snape’s instance". A few punctuational errors and such but nothing proofreading won't fix. Please do update again soon, I look forward to reading more! Author's Response: Yeah..my spell check is in auto correct mode...a poor excuse for a beta and it puts what it thinks I mean >.< lol. Anywho I'm glad your liking the story
I hope Snape becomes Harry's guardian permanently.
ROFL, I can just see Umbridge once they're all done with her! There may not be much left for Dumbledore to do! :) Author's Response: I know right....she'll be all twitchy and everything lol
Author's Response: He still has to go...Adrenaline and such...though I wasnt aware I hadnt included it in this chapter. Its in the next one, I had to have a mini scene with them picking out the trees..lol.. well its happy in the end..but some people want the happy now..thats not how it works lol Thanks though. Yea, I always seemed to miss things even if I double check the storie for errors. Anyways I'm glad you like it.
Poor Harry! Author's Response: They ate lunch during lunch hour..I was going for alot of people in one place...really easy for someone to slip pass Severus and Tonks...I would think that Sirius knows how to mask his scent and therefore throw off Moony. Harry would never allow tht, he loves Sirius...but yes I agree..
Author's Response: Trust me..I love Padfoot as well..but not here...thanks so much :) |
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