Peep me looking like the fucking Cheshire Cat as well as Minnie 😁😁
I need to find more fics where Umbitch gets what she deserves 😈
As well as the Dursleys, they’re assholes
| Title: Chapter 17
| 14 Apr 2016 7:17 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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*flails happily*
Beat the Dursleys!!! And Umbridge!
I can't wait to read more of this. I love it. I can't wait. I want to know what they all do.
It sounds like Umbridge is in for it. That should be a fun chapter. And Remus finally has realized that Sirius is having severe behavioral problems and needs help. To top it off, the Dursleys will be stuck in the castle with all those freaks. I wonder what they thought when a house elf showed up to direct them to their room. One suggestion. Severus Snape has fairly formal speech patterns. I can't imagine him saying gonna or wanna. Harry would but not Snape. Otherwise, a really fun chapter.
Good chapter. Just a few mistakes such as "nothing more but to hit Sirius". Instead of "but", the correct word is "than". Also, when Sirius says "he’s got you all fool", the correct form of the word fool should actually be "fooled". Like I said before, minor mistakes that don't take away much from the story but can be avoided through either a Beta or proofreading.
Glad to hear from this story again. Update soon!
The Toad is gonna get hers, as is Vernon! Sound like Sirius is starting to regret his actions as well. Kudos on a good chapter.
The Dursleys should be afraid of Sev's wrath. As should Umbridge. I cannot wait to see the curses come together.
what's the matter with Sirius??? Is he under a spell? A curse? Was he bitten by a bug? Whatever it is, I hope Remus finds out and Sirius can act like himself again.
Before it's too late!!!
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