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Title: Chapter 17 06 Aug 2012 5:52 am
Reviewer: DevonShard (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait to read more of this. I love it. I can't wait. I want to know what they all do.
Title: Chapter 17 13 Jul 2012 2:20 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    It sounds like Umbridge is in for it. That should be a fun chapter. And Remus finally has realized that Sirius is having severe behavioral problems and needs help. To top it off, the Dursleys will be stuck in the castle with all those freaks. I wonder what they thought when a house elf showed up to direct them to their room. One suggestion. Severus Snape has fairly formal speech patterns. I can't imagine him saying gonna or wanna. Harry would but not Snape. Otherwise, a really fun chapter.
Title: Chapter 17 12 Jul 2012 8:07 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Just a few mistakes such as "nothing more but to hit Sirius". Instead of "but", the correct word is "than". Also, when Sirius says "he’s got you all fool", the correct form of the word fool should actually be "fooled". Like I said before, minor mistakes that don't take away much from the story but can be avoided through either a Beta or proofreading.

    Glad to hear from this story again. Update soon!
Title: Chapter 17 12 Jul 2012 7:02 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    The Toad is gonna get hers, as is Vernon! Sound like Sirius is starting to regret his actions as well. Kudos on a good chapter.
Title: Chapter 17 12 Jul 2012 3:24 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    The Dursleys should be afraid of Sev's wrath. As should Umbridge. I cannot wait to see the curses come together.
Title: Chapter 17 12 Jul 2012 11:43 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    what's the matter with Sirius??? Is he under a spell? A curse? Was he bitten by a bug? Whatever it is, I hope Remus finds out and Sirius can act like himself again.
    Before it's too late!!!
Title: Chapter 16 14 Jun 2012 11:12 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    padfoot is crazy! go sev kick his ass. Yes I loved it more please...
Title: Chapter 16 14 Jun 2012 6:04 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder how Sirius snuck into the bathroom? At least Severus took care of him. Oh, boy, Christmas chapter is coming up. I love Christmas chapters!

    Author's Response: I'll explain how he got pass next chapter when Harry asks Snape the same thing.
Title: Chapter 16 14 Jun 2012 5:31 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, the ending was sweet. I'm glad that Severus paid Sirius back for hurting Harry so but he certainly deserves much worse than that!

    Also, I do believe you mean "Snape's insistence" not "Snape’s instance". A few punctuational errors and such but nothing proofreading won't fix.

    Please do update again soon, I look forward to reading more!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah..my spell check is in auto correct mode...a poor excuse for a beta and it puts what it thinks I mean >.< lol. Anywho I'm glad your liking the story

Title: Chapter 16 13 Jun 2012 10:31 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Sirius is majorly stupid
    I hope Snape becomes Harry's guardian permanently.

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