Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 11 02 May 2012 2:27 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is am ignorant jerk sometimes... (sigh).Just when things were getting better! Update again soon, I really look forward to reading more!

    Author's Response:

    He had to learn, Snape always had a habit of taking out things on the wrong people. And thanks I plan to update soonish lol

Title: Chapter 10 02 May 2012 2:21 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    This is so sweet and sad all at the same time. It's only getting better and better (or worse and worse depending on how you look at it. Please update again soon, I'm looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 11 01 May 2012 8:37 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was an awesome chapter. Harry is a fragile little guy isn't he. He can face down basilisks and voldemort but when it comes to family, its a different story. Snape is really out of his depth isn't he. Ah well, you live you learn. Now he just needs to find Harry and give him a big hug, apologize profusely and praise him for the spotless room while informing him that he is not a house-elf or housekeeper.

    Author's Response:

    You understand it perfectedly what I was trying to get across, and yea Live and Learn is correct. Dont worry he will let Harry know that he wont have to 'earn his keep' here.

Title: Chapter 11 01 May 2012 3:26 pm
Reviewer: Mozalini (Signed) [Report This]
    Eeee! Still loving this so much. Keep up the good work; you've got me hooked! :)

    Author's Response: Aww thanks, and I'm glad you like it
Title: Chapter 10 13 Apr 2012 1:09 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    oh very nice more please

    Author's Response: Awesome, I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 10 10 Apr 2012 5:23 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter. I love the realization at the end. Just one suggestion. It's always a good idea to tell a chapter from one pov instead of multiples. Pick the pov that best gets across what you want the reader to know and stick with that. This is a great way to build suspense. If you'll notice, JKR primarily uses Harry's pov in her books. It's a great way for the reader to figure things out right along with Harry.

    Author's Response: thanks for the advice but thats not my writing style. others like myself like to know a different point of views at times; though im glad you like my story, it wont change tho. 
Title: Chapter 10 08 Apr 2012 2:37 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a really sweet ending there. I won't be surprised if Severus murders Sirius by the end of this story. The cards aren't good for the grim.

    Looking forward to more!!

    Author's Response: If Remus hadnt beatened him too it lol. But yes the odds are definitly not in Sirius's favor.
Title: Chapter 10 07 Apr 2012 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    what a birthday gift for me ( my birthday was the 6th)

    beautiful chapter remus' anger sirisu is a dead man.

    as much as it was guilt making Harry tell it was more then that

    the love from Snape awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

    Author's Response: Happy belated birthday lol, and Im so glad you liked it
Title: Chapter 10 06 Apr 2012 5:18 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Towards the end, the dialogue lines don't have spaces like they do in the beginning.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I fixed it now
Title: Chapter 10 06 Apr 2012 5:13 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Can you take a bit of honest correction? Try spacing out the dialogue, it's all bleeding together making it difficult to concentrate. Other than that, kudos on a wonderful chapter.

    Author's Response: I didnt realize the the dialogue towards the end didnt space when I copied and pasted it, but its fixed now, and thanks

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