Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 5 16 Dec 2011 11:35 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story. I believe the timeline is off for this chapter. It started at breakfast but when Harry runs from the room and goes to the Burrow, the Weasleys are having dinner. One paragraph states it had only been 15 minutes since he ran away from Snape. Then when they come home, Harry is put to bed for the evening. Therefore we went from breakfast to dinner in about 30 minute time frame.

    Again, I really like this story and I am looking forward to your next update.

    Author's Response: Ooh, thanks for catching that, I hadnt noticed...I'll try to keep it more consistent in the future Chapters. But I think I only messed the timeline in this chapter..thats what I get for writing instead of doing homework lol.
Title: Chapter 5 16 Dec 2011 10:52 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, sweetest chapter so far, please update soon I really want to read about Snape's apology!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'll try I...Sev apologise to Harry? The bane of his existent? lol Yea I'm looking forward to that too

Title: Chapter 5 15 Dec 2011 2:52 pm
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Update soon

    Author's Response: I will ASAP
Title: Chapter 5 15 Dec 2011 2:34 pm
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Sev, what is it that all the Brit say.... ah yes.... 'Keep Calm and Carry on' until your in a safe place to show your anger. Talk to harry in a calm voice!

    *laughs* Good chapter, I especially loved the last bit. So I'm thinking Harry might need some counseling or at least talk to someone... maybe someone in the muggle world where he is unknown? He fits for crisis counseling.

    So if you can sneak in some more "my child"s and "dad"s I'd be most appreciative!

    Author's Response:

    Yea he needs to larn to control his temper...for Harry's sake at least. I'll think on that, and see what I can do...

     Of course I promise more little moments of sweetness and fluff when I can 

Title: Chapter 5 15 Dec 2011 9:24 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey! That was a really good chapter! I hope that you update this really soon... As in... Well as soon as possible lol! =)

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and I'll try to update...soonish lol
Title: Chapter 4 14 Dec 2011 7:50 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohhhhh this is getting good-an already livid Snape is getting angrier! I would love to see Umbridge be asked to meet the faculty of Hogwarts just o see Snape give her a drink-of arsenic or some creation of his that he made specifically for her. It would be even more hlarious if he was dicreet about it so much so that he is not able to be caught! Of course Dumbledore would know but I doubt he would give Severus up.

    Author's Response: lol, wheres the fun in that.  Poison wouldnt let her suffer, and I can see Dumbledore, Snape, and McGonagall ALL wanting to make her suffer...
Title: Chapter 4 11 Dec 2011 8:39 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    And so it begins. Die Umbridge, die!

    Author's Response: I know..I wonder what there gonna do to her... lol
Title: Chapter 4 10 Dec 2011 5:02 pm
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh good chapter! Can't wait to see Snape's reaction to Umbridge's detentions...How much you want to bet he'll show this memory to Dumbledore?? Can we say "Katie bar the door!"? :P

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Of course...Who wants to see Albus's reaction...Umbi...umbridge is still at the school..That gives me an idea lol
Title: Chapter 4 10 Dec 2011 8:40 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Gah! How about Harry poking you for leaving him with that line?! AUGH I hate cliffies! Kudos on the chapter though, well done :).

    Author's Response: Would you believe me if I said, I didnt relaize that it was a cliff hanger? LOl..I hate them too..I'll update soon I promise
Title: Chapter 4 10 Dec 2011 6:26 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Dun dun duunnn..cliffhanger! Update soon, I look forward to reading the next chapter and especially Snape's reaction!

    Author's Response: I hadnt realized it was a cliff hanger...was too tired to continue writing lol. I'll update soon....his reaction lol

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