Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 1 20 Nov 2011 4:31 am
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great beginning!I can actually see Sirius reacting that way too! Great job in keeping everyone in character, and I loved how you had Harry's flashback play a major part in him and Prof.Snape's interaction! I really think that this could become an amazing Snape adopts Harry story or a Snape becoming Harry's guardian story too, just a thought. I really hope Harry does start to rely on Snape and in the process Sirius causes more problems because he is jealous. It would just be awesome to see Snape go head to head with Sirius!

    Author's Response: Thanks that was really a good idea you had..it will be in the story I promise you lol. I might have to not make this a two-shot though lol
Title: Chapter 1 20 Nov 2011 3:25 am
Reviewer: zalievana (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful beginning:) i felt that Harrys transition into trusting Severus might have been a little too quick, but overly I loved it. I want another chapter...and just to warn you, twoshot wont do...I wont a full story:) pleeease:):):)

    Author's Response: Lol we'll see, otherwise part two might be extrememly long. Oh and it seems like Harry was trusting Severus , and he does to an extent. But seeing as he doesnt trust any male adult not to hurt him, thats going to come into the light. In a sense he trusted Sev to get him out of there but he doesnt trust him not to hurt him. He knows the professor hates him, so hes scared of him..does that make sense? lol
Title: Chapter 1 19 Nov 2011 11:15 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it
Title: Chapter 1 19 Nov 2011 7:34 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Sirius too, even if he WAS an idiot at times :D.

    Poor Harry, he's going through a lot right now. I hope someone can get through to his godfather so the idiot can feel properly ashamed! Good thing Severus is there to help.

    Author's Response:

    Yea he was lol, he was like a little kid you no? I love how everyone is a Sev lover lol

Title: Chapter 1 19 Nov 2011 1:13 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it, update soon

    Author's Response: I'll try to thanks
Title: Chapter 1 18 Nov 2011 2:58 pm
Reviewer: mortedevivre (Signed) [Report This]
    this was well written. even though you said you really hate portraying padfoot in a mean light i think you did that very well here. i can't wait for the second half of the story.

    Author's Response: I did, I felt so bad for Sirius even though you can kinda see him doing this type of thing anyway. Thanks though and I'm glad you liked it
Title: Chapter 1 18 Nov 2011 2:01 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    wow.

    Author's Response: lol Hoping thats a good wow lol
Title: Chapter 1 18 Nov 2011 8:38 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, what an awesome beginning! I do hope you continue it soon. Way to go Ron, for once you did the right thing at the right time, woohoo!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks, I know I always hated that Ron was immature up until the last second, I actually liked him when he wasnt being a git lol and I'll try to update really soon
Title: Chapter 1 18 Nov 2011 6:48 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    But there needs to be more!

    Author's Response: Yea I'm making it a two shot, a part of teh challenge was to show the aftermath lol
Title: Chapter 1 18 Nov 2011 6:18 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness! This needs more, lawl! Kudos, a job well done :)

    Author's Response: Yea I thought that too, I guess it'll be a two shot because I need to focus on the aftermath

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