Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 15 22 Jul 2013 1:56 am
Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the story for the most part. Great writing and a great plot line. The only thing that I don't like so far is that you say Minerva didn't know about the blood quill, but she did and she talked to Dolores about it. It happens in the book and the movie. Where they have a confrontation about leaving punishments up to heads of houses. Other than that I think that this is a super story and I love your writing!

    Author's Response: Oh....well I dont remember that part. *shrugs* It's fanfiction though...so it's allowed to hve mistakes, not to mention Canon completely flies out the window the majority of the time.  Glad you like it for the most part I guess.
Title: Chapter 25 12 Jul 2013 3:56 am
Reviewer: memelovescaps (Signed) [Report This]
    I have spent the WHOLE afternoon reading this fic, and I can't wait for more! Please continue as soon as you can! You even made me register so I could be able to review the fic and follow it, you bad bad person! :P

    Now seriously, I really liked how you develop the story, not only Severus and Harry's relationship, but also Ron's with Severus, and Sirius, Remus and Albus as well. I am delighted to read how Harry has changed his former insecurity for the unconditional love for his new father, and I melt inside when I read Severus' reactions to Harry, and how he has come to deeply care for him and love him so much. I'm not really into 'Severitus' stories (I'm much a Snarry sort of person, I prefer it when they end up having a romantic story rather than a fraternal one) but this one has absolutely made my day and I will be coming back to read when you write more.

    Congratulations for this amazing fic!
Title: Chapter 25 22 Jun 2013 4:40 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the mature Ron. It's nice to see that he has Harry's best interest at heart. Christmas chapters are always fun. Harry's quilt, made with love and potions was neat and I enjoyed that Snape got a subdued, Molly-made sweater.
Title: Chapter 25 21 Jun 2013 7:50 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    hmmm interesting I am happy that there Christmas wasn't ruined lol I look forward to more. thank you
Title: Chapter 25 21 Jun 2013 12:02 am
Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh, it's so nice to see Dudley acts this way around Harry and I am even happier about him being able of getting his magic back.

    You managed to make me like him :)

    Although I know (as much as Severus) that Albus didn't really mean what he said I still can't get over it... and then he just walks into the christmas morning and acts like everything is fine.
    But well - that's the Albus we know... and after a few more chapters including a remorseful Albus he will be forgiven :D

    It is good that Severus handled the situation that well - he is the right person to care for Harry.

    But I see a maaajor angst chapter incoming - a letter from Sirius can't be that good (and if I'm being honest I don't even want him to become good... he messed up too badly for my taste).

    Please continue as soon as possible, I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Title: Chapter 5 03 May 2013 7:16 am
Reviewer: Christina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is amazing. I have a feeling I have read it on another site, but I am not certain where. Perhaps Fanfiction?
    Anyway, the way that you depict the relationship between Harry and Snape is very well done.
    The ending of this chapter was especially sweet.
Title: Chapter 24 18 Apr 2013 4:36 pm
Reviewer: dancer (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome story; can't wait for more
Title: Chapter 24 09 Apr 2013 12:04 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your story! It is awesome! Please continue writing it! I want to see if Albus can renew his trust and love with Severus.
Title: Chapter 3 18 Mar 2013 8:19 am
Reviewer: txn (Signed) [Report This]
    Your characterization is good, but your grammatical errors keep me from really enjoying your story.

    The main one is the use of "your" and "you're."

    "Your" indicates ownership. You've used it correctly here: “Open your eyes wolf, of course he doesn’t want to stay here. Can you blame him?”

    "You're" is a contraction of "you" and "are." Here is an instance where you should have used "you're" instead of "your:" “As well as anyone can be I guess, he’s still scared if that’s what YOUR asking." It should be "you're" as in, "if that's what you're asking."
Title: Chapter 24 12 Mar 2013 7:58 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    But as Albus said, not for a LOOOONG time. Good chapter, but I think you need a beta :P. Wish I could, but my schedule is too busy to allow me to write my own stories! Kudos, and keep up the good work

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