| Title: Third Stave: The Ghost of Christmas Present
| 09 Nov 2016 10:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good twist on the story
I really liked this--but I wonder if little Albus has Severus as a middle name?
| Title: Third Stave: The Ghost of Christmas Present
| 15 Aug 2012 2:13 am
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| Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed)
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Harry's family were beautifully drawn.
| Title: Third Stave: The Ghost of Christmas Present
| 16 Dec 2011 2:29 am
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| Reviewer: NicNac (Signed)
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Oh, Aberforth and his goats. Interesting choice for one of the Ghosts of Christmas, but I think you've made if work.
Author's Response: Thank you! Poor Aberforth doesn't get a minute's peace, being Dumbles' brother...
Wow. Dickens may have originally written the story, but you rewrote it wonderfully! More please!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! This is my first try imitating the style of one particular author, and I'm so glad you think it worked! More to come soon :)!
This was AMAZING! I loved every second of it, it was very well-written and it nearly brought tears to my eyes. Please update again soon, I'm dying to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Aw, poor little Albus. The next part has always been my favorite part of the story. Old Severus better shape up..
Author's Response: Thank you very much, and I hope you'll like the next part! Old Snape is in for some serious soul-searching...
| Title: Third Stave: The Ghost of Christmas Present
| 09 Dec 2011 3:05 pm
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| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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I knew poor little Albus would be a werewolf.
Does Voldie exist in this story and what happen to the Potter wealth?
I can't see Harry as a potion apprentice - maybe he is better at it than the books showed.
Author's Response: Voldie does exist and will make an appearance... sooner than Snape might like! As for the Potter wealth, I think Harry spent most of it to help war victims (his saving people thing...), and he isn't a very good potions apprentice (or at least not a happy one) - as an apprentice teacher, he just got landed with the job! Thank you very much for reviewing!
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