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Title: Where the Crystal Ball Breaks 22 Jan 2012 7:10 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, that had me looking for the tissues, although as Severus said it had to be done. It was hard to read - not for the writing, which was excellent - but simply because I've got so used to fanfiction Snape having all the answers which here he doesn't. Neither does there seem anyone else on the horizon to give him hope and you've made him such a nice character too!
    Anyway, good work and I'll look forward to the fun bits coming up.

    Author's Response: Thanks rosina for the feedback! I'm sorry it's so sad, but with this sort of story it has to be. But there will be a lot of fun stuff though, so keep looking ahead. Cheers!
Title: Where the Crystal Ball Breaks 22 Jan 2012 3:10 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    No, you have to fix it. Fix it and make Severus well. He is young and those children need a father.

    Author's Response: It is a ghastly predicament, isn't it?
Title: Where the Crystal Ball Breaks 22 Jan 2012 12:56 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    That was so, so sad. I loved your characterizations in this, with Harry's eternal optimism holding out until the last possible moment. I also loved how you described Severus' thoughts and feelings, particularly the bit about normal things like the weather not changing when everything else has changed. That was very well done.
    Bring on the fun bits, now :)! And bring on a cure - I'm like Harry, I guess, I won't give up hope.
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank Sita! I'm glad you like Harry and Severus' reactions and such, as I've put a lot of thought into it all. I'm looking forward for the fun bits too, and they're coming down the pipe soon, so keep reading!
Title: Where the Crystal Ball Breaks 22 Jan 2012 12:45 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    *sniff* that was sad.

    Author's Response: Thank your for reviewing.
Title: Ashen Flags 17 Jan 2012 11:13 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Draco. Well, I suppose if you're going to let people know they're getting to you, you might as well do it big time.

    Author's Response: Ha ha, yeah, I guess, eh? Thanks for the comment!
Title: Ashen Flags 17 Jan 2012 11:13 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm not sure that was wise, Draco... he's going to have to live with his House, after all. Still, I'm glad he's standing up to them.

    My favorite bit in this chapter was your analysis of the Houses and their respective "revenge psychology" - I thought that was very spot-on, and of course very well written, too.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: I quite agree. I'm super excited that you liked the revenge psychology, as I did spend a lot of time thinking that over! Thanks for the feedback!
Title: Ashen Flags 17 Jan 2012 5:21 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this is very un-dracoish. i'm worried for him too

    Author's Response: Yes, but he's having a rough go, so therefore he wouldn't be much of himself, would he? Thank you for the review.
Title: The Beautiful Beyond 15 Jan 2012 6:16 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Have you found a cure for Sev yet?????That's all I'm interested in right now so get to it!!!!!

    Author's Response: Well ... these things take time. This story is probably going to be about 28 chapters, so nothing's going to come too fast mind you. Hope you at least enjoyed some of humour.
Title: The Beautiful Beyond 13 Jan 2012 11:55 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely. There's something about just you and the stars at night, but Laura wasn't intrusive. Harry and Severus are still clueless then - maybe Munk can give them some hints!

    Author's Response: Oh gosh, could you imagine if Munk could talk and did give tips? "They like it when you kill a mouse for them ..." Somehow I don't think Severus or Harry would impress anyone with any hints from the cat. Thanks for the hilarious thought rosina!
Title: The Beautiful Beyond 13 Jan 2012 7:14 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Munk! So that's what you've been doing :)! Well, I'm sure that with a castle full of students and teachers Snape will find people to adopt the kittens (I can see it now, Sev putting up posters saying "Please visit dungeons to adopt a cat" ;)!).
    Another great chapter, and I'm impressed with Snape's honesty when Harry asked him about women. He could have just made something up, after all. And I liked that he still talks to Lily.
    Will he tell the boys soon?

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! Giggle ... Snape with kittens. And, yes, he will tell the boys within the next couple of chapters.

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