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Title: The Lonely Watchman 25 Mar 2012 1:55 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Yes, I suspected that Severus would have trouble changing back... but I have faith in him that he'll think of a way to reveal his identity even in his fox form! Poor Harry and Draco... it must be horrible for them, wondering if their father is still alive (and probably hoping that he isn't...).
    Looking forward to more :)!

    Author's Response: Yes that would be horrible, and I suppose Harry and Draco might just be hoping that he isn't alive, what with the way Voldemort treats his prisoners. Anyway, thank you for reviewing, and I am glad you liked it!
Title: Laura Baldwin, Enigma 25 Mar 2012 5:55 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Laura and Severus seem like a good pair. They both have similar interests and enjoy each others company. I am surprised Severus didn't let her do a scan after his coughing fit though. It is her specialty and might have revealed something.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you think Laura and Severus go well together. In my mind, his reasoning for not letting her scan him was that he was afraid to let on that he has been ill, what with Harry, Draco and Hermione nearby. On top of that, he is a bit defensive, and has a tendency to hide weakness, and unfortunately he thinks illness is yet another weakness. Anyway, that's my reasoning for why he didn't let Laura scan him. I agree that it would have helped him to let her scan him. Thanks for the feedback! 
Title: The Lonely Watchman 25 Mar 2012 3:24 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Poor Draco! Thinking that Severus is dead...and yes, I did enjoy the chapter very much, but gahhh, I wish Minerva or the Headmaster would come over and have a Eureka moment and get Severus out of his form!

    I really hate to see our boys hurting like this.

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, it is unfortunate for the boys to be hurting. I feel a little evil, actually. But I'm glad you liked it!
Title: The Lonely Watchman 24 Mar 2012 11:21 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    No, not really surprised that Severus is stuck as a fox. Wonder what name he'll be given. Maybe he needs to stay small and drink lots of the Weasley's Wort concoction for a bit?

    Author's Response: You'll find out his name next chapter. :) As for the Weasley's Wort, it can't hurt really, can it? Thanks for the review Rosina!
Title: A Ruined Road 21 Mar 2012 3:19 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    So - Severus lives to fight another day, and the penny has dropped about Laura. Good! It was nice that it was Sirius who was so kind to the fox, which was an excellent choice for Severus' animagus form. I didn't know black foxes existed - had to Google them for information.

    Author's Response: Glad you're happy about the Laura thing. I figured that given Severus' past he would have a hard time accepting the fact that he had fallen for someone new, what with previous experiences and the rather secluded life he has led. I'm super pumped that you liked Severus' animagus form, and that I got to introduce you to the black fox! Pretty cool, eh? I didn't know they existed either up until I started doing research for this project. I thought a black fox fit Severus well, considering how much black foxes were hunted back in the day, and how they are considered unlucky. Anyway, thanks for the review rosina!
Title: A Ruined Road 20 Mar 2012 3:22 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    A fox! I love it! And a black fox, too... yes, I agree, it's a good Animagus form for Severus :). Foxes are great!

    I love how you described the episode in Malfoy Manor; not too graphic, but still intense enough so that Severus' pain and fear felt very real.

    At first I thought it was Arthur Weasley who had found him, but Sirius would be a lot more fun, of course... wait till he learns that he petted the 'greasy git' and called him 'little guy' ;)!

    As for Severus transforming back, I have a feeling that it might not be that easy - or that his Animagus form might help in some way to cure his illness (that was basically my theory ;) ).

    Looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Good to hear that you appreciate Severus' animagus form. I had it in my mind for at least a year plus that he would be great as a black fox, and had yet to work it into a story. I'm liking the speculations, as I do love hearing theories. Thanks for reviewing Sita!
Title: A Ruined Road 20 Mar 2012 8:09 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    yay! he survived!

    Author's Response: Yay indeed!
Title: A Ruined Road 20 Mar 2012 3:05 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    yea!!! but Sev should change back soon so the boys and everyone else won't be so worried

    Author's Response: Yes, definitely. He doesn't exactly have the energy just now. It requires a lot of magical strength. Thanks for reviewing.
Title: A Ruined Road 20 Mar 2012 3:03 am
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this was great! A black fox...lol no pun intended when you made him a fox right? ;)

    I just had the thought that maybe the Cruico curse could fix the disease that Severus has...that's my hope and I am sticking to it! :P

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review Vanime.
Title: The Verdict Reached 16 Mar 2012 8:26 am
Reviewer: PhantomElphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus No! Really well written emotionally wrenching chapter, you had me in tears by the end of it- literally.

    Keep up the excellent work.

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks PhantomElphaba! It's always nice to hear from people who haven't gotten around to reviewing before. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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