Oh! This is Brilliant! If the rest lives up to this chapter you have an instant classic on your hands...er computer!
You had BIG fun writing this chapter, right?
Wow...this story just keeps getting better and better! I can hardly wait to read about Bill and Harry's little shopping trip to Harrod's....hmm, Severus, Bill and Harry really do need to think of a "new name" for Harry? I mean you can't have a girl called "Harry", it's just asking to attract attention, which certainly is something they don't want to do!
Though enjoyed the blushing conversation between Severus and Bill, in Harry's presense about just what supplies needed to be got for the girl, including those for her menses...oh the blush from the guys, hehe!
I died...when Severus mentioned getting his period lol...I love this story cant say that enough
"Mr. Weasley, are you seriously suggesting that it's worth calling in a life debt to not have to go bra shopping?"
HAHAHAHA!!! I love you, lol. Best. Line. Ever.
I really like where you're going with this story. It's unusual and not something I'd normally read, but it's good so far. Poor Harry, though. Talk about traumatic... Ron's going to be such an ass about this isn't he? I think Hermione will take it better. :)
Update soon, please!
I really like this story. I'm a girl and the mention of the "unmentionalble's" is intresting. I told a family member about I and she said "o god" witch ment that she thinks it will be intresting. I will read this when I'm depressed it a good laugh
I like how you portray the characters, and Harrie's cunfusion about her identity. I think you might make it easier for yourself by switching to writing Harrie instead of Harry, to remind yourself that she is now female. I don't think you mixed up the pronouns any more than the characters themselves would, and while reading about Harrie getting "his menses" sounded strange in my ears, Severus is still getting used to her being female.
LOL, I'd love to see more protective Severus, that would so make my day!
And not to worry about the gender disagreement, I think that you using Harry's name first and then following it with a she works. After all, at this point it's still pretty new and everyone's pretty confused and startled at this new change. What you were going before works fine, I suppose.
Also, are we going to see any Bill/Harry(girl) romance? That would be pretty cute, especially after Severus plays the Spanish Inquisition on him!
I also wanted to ask if Hermione and Ron are going to be involved in this story. It would make the plot more complicated as Ron, being the hot-headed male he is, drool over Harry. Of course, you can portray that any way you choose, if you decide to go ahead with that. It'll certainly be exciting to see how everything plays out!
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