| Title: Chapter 3
| 16 May 2013 11:28 pm
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| Reviewer: furrina (Anonymous)
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Poor Snape. First he has a hot 16 year old babe as his daughter... and now he has two potential suitors lined up within two days of her existence.
LOL loved that last part! Now the true question is will Harry go out with Bill or Draco? I wonder who Snape would prefer...probably no one but between the two, most likely Bill. Thanks for updating!
WOOT! Love it!! More Please.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 13 Dec 2011 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great story thank you. I love Bill and Draco's reaction to Harry and Severus getting in "Father" is a real laugh thank you
A little slow in places but still quite enjoyable. What a lovely ending to the chapter! Looks like Bill might have a little competition. And, go Sev!
Mmmmm... I love this story! I'm thinking Severus should be more weary of Bill though. He seems to be enjoying Harry's presence and shopping with her a little too much. Especially the t-shirt thing kind of sent warning flags up for me.
Great story!
Another awesome chapter! I love this story!!
I'm really enjoying your different spin on the "Snape's child" scenario.
The only problem I'm having is that I'm waiting for the melt down. I really can't imagine a 16 year old taking this news so calmly, even with the calming droughts. After all, Harry has already been noticing females, had daydreamed about and asked Cho out (if you're sticking with canon to this point) and now he finds that instead of dating girls, he IS one? Yeah, that could really mess with a teenager's sense of self.
I can easily imagine him/her being furious with Lily and probably hating her at this point. His/her entire life has been a lie and now he/she has to try to figure out how to live as a girl?
When you start with his insecurities of living with the Dursleys and add to that the fear that Lily might have used the potion because she was ashamed of either her child or the real father, I can see a serious melt down on the horizon.
Then there's also the thought that Lily was trying to pull a "fast one" on James and the questioning of whether or not Lily would ever had told Snape. Since Snape was obviously a victim in Lily's actions too.
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