Title: Chapter 4
| 16 Dec 2011 1:16 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved this althoug Severus rather took a back seat here.
"Mr. Weasley, do all the girls cry themselves to sleep on your lap or is it just my daughter?"
I think this just became one of my favorite fanfic lines lol. Really good so far. I usually hate female Harry stories but yours is interesting.
OK, I'm now alright without him/her having a melt-down.
I really enjoyed the Harry/Draco and Harry/Bill interaction in this chapter. Well done.
Another awesome chapter!!
haha great last line...I loved reading this chapter, it was very well written and I enjoyed all the details that you put into it...please keep on writing!
Then again, Bill seems like he could be Harry's older brother...shoot Draco is growing on me again...This is sweet and unusual, But I love it nonetheless. Cant wait for the next update
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