More please! This is a neat idea, and I foresee a lot of psychological drama about to ensue. *grin*
And yay for Slytherin!Bill!
It was nice to see Severus interact so well with Bill. So many people make him be in a rage all of the time. I like how you've let him show that he can be reasonable.
Poor Harry. Not only a terribly painful transformation--he must have felt like he was regrowing all of his bones under Skelegrow, except it was everything changing--but now a totally unavoidable identity crisis. Obviously a new name will be chosen. Just, please, don't make it Harriet. That is just a little bit too obvious.
Keep up the great work, and do, please, keep Bill stopping by. I like how he and Severus got along in this chapter very much!
I'm hooked! Please update soon, I'm looking forward to reading more!
Wow....what a truly awesome start to this story, for which I certainly want to read more!
I especially can't wait to learn more
about the truth behind Harry's past
of just why Lily chose to hide her child's true gender...and why she'd risk giving her child such a potentially deadly potion? But also to learn how Severus and Harry will get on together once Harry has been told the truth about herself? Just what will Harry, decide to do about his past persona as "Harry James Potter" but also about her education....what name will she chose to be called? What will happen in regards to Dumbledore, her friends, the ministry, her "Potter" vaults?
| Title: Chapter 1
| 07 Dec 2011 10:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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An interesting take although I'm not sure that the Lily depicted in the books would do this but hey it's AU!
This is a really interesting start to a story that, I have to admit, I was pretty hesitant about reading. Please update soon, I'm anxious to see Harry's reaction.
Good work.
I like so far!! I really like the interpretation you have of Petunia. I think 'scared' is a really accurate assumption. I'll have to see where you go with this. :0)
I don't know what to say about this story yet. So far it seems interesting and I've never read a story like this before. I want to see Harry's reaction... I bet that will be funny to us readers, not to Harry or Severus.
This is intresting...how soon are your updates going to be?
This is brilliant! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I love Harry turning into a girl and Bill as the person who knows - and has even seen Lily once...
I'm afraid I can't be a beta (too much to do at uni) but I definitely could read ahead!
Nice, intriguing beginning!!
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