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Title: Chapter 2 10 Dec 2011 3:41 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I died...when Severus mentioned getting his period lol...I love this story cant say that enough
Title: Chapter 2 10 Dec 2011 3:34 am
Reviewer: EmmalynnLilliannaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    "Mr. Weasley, are you seriously suggesting that it's worth calling in a life debt to not have to go bra shopping?"
    HAHAHAHA!!! I love you, lol. Best. Line. Ever.
    I really like where you're going with this story. It's unusual and not something I'd normally read, but it's good so far. Poor Harry, though. Talk about traumatic... Ron's going to be such an ass about this isn't he? I think Hermione will take it better. :)
    Update soon, please!
Title: Chapter 2 10 Dec 2011 3:20 am
Reviewer: Ehann (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like this story. I'm a girl and the mention of the "unmentionalble's" is intresting. I told a family member about I and she said "o god" witch ment that she thinks it will be intresting. I will read this when I'm depressed it a good laugh
Title: Chapter 2 10 Dec 2011 2:50 am
Reviewer: Ragnhild (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you portray the characters, and Harrie's cunfusion about her identity. I think you might make it easier for yourself by switching to writing Harrie instead of Harry, to remind yourself that she is now female. I don't think you mixed up the pronouns any more than the characters themselves would, and while reading about Harrie getting "his menses" sounded strange in my ears, Severus is still getting used to her being female.
Title: Chapter 2 10 Dec 2011 1:08 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL, I'd love to see more protective Severus, that would so make my day!
    And not to worry about the gender disagreement, I think that you using Harry's name first and then following it with a she works. After all, at this point it's still pretty new and everyone's pretty confused and startled at this new change. What you were going before works fine, I suppose.
    Also, are we going to see any Bill/Harry(girl) romance? That would be pretty cute, especially after Severus plays the Spanish Inquisition on him!
    I also wanted to ask if Hermione and Ron are going to be involved in this story. It would make the plot more complicated as Ron, being the hot-headed male he is, drool over Harry. Of course, you can portray that any way you choose, if you decide to go ahead with that. It'll certainly be exciting to see how everything plays out!
Title: Chapter 2 10 Dec 2011 1:04 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha! This story is going to be fabulous! I hope that Sev is the one that has to explain what all that it is to harry! Great job!!!
Title: Chapter 2 10 Dec 2011 12:36 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome job! This is great so far!
Title: Chapter 2 10 Dec 2011 12:33 am
Reviewer: Ventus Princeps (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful second chapter! I think any inconsistencies in he/she actually would make it seem more real. I mean even though Harry is female now, Snape and Bill have always known him as a he so they are both liable to slip up now and then.

    I think the Bill and Harry interaction in this chapter was really cute and very well done... and Harry giggling his boobs in the mirror is totally what a teenager would do! :D

    I think bringing Fleur in woud be super interesting, by the way.

    Anyway, very good. Can't wait for more!
Title: Chapter 2 09 Dec 2011 11:54 pm
Reviewer: LadyNiteRaven (Signed) [Report This]
    WOOT! More Please!!!
Title: Chapter 1 09 Dec 2011 7:09 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    More please! This is a neat idea, and I foresee a lot of psychological drama about to ensue. *grin*

    And yay for Slytherin!Bill!

    It was nice to see Severus interact so well with Bill. So many people make him be in a rage all of the time. I like how you've let him show that he can be reasonable.

    Poor Harry. Not only a terribly painful transformation--he must have felt like he was regrowing all of his bones under Skelegrow, except it was everything changing--but now a totally unavoidable identity crisis. Obviously a new name will be chosen. Just, please, don't make it Harriet. That is just a little bit too obvious.

    Keep up the great work, and do, please, keep Bill stopping by. I like how he and Severus got along in this chapter very much!

    Author's Response:

    Definitely not Harriet, but you have to wait until chapter six to find out.

    Thank you so much for the review, this is so fun!


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