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Reviews For Snape's Daughter
HAHAHAHA!!! I love you, lol. Best. Line. Ever. I really like where you're going with this story. It's unusual and not something I'd normally read, but it's good so far. Poor Harry, though. Talk about traumatic... Ron's going to be such an ass about this isn't he? I think Hermione will take it better. :) Update soon, please!
And not to worry about the gender disagreement, I think that you using Harry's name first and then following it with a she works. After all, at this point it's still pretty new and everyone's pretty confused and startled at this new change. What you were going before works fine, I suppose. Also, are we going to see any Bill/Harry(girl) romance? That would be pretty cute, especially after Severus plays the Spanish Inquisition on him! I also wanted to ask if Hermione and Ron are going to be involved in this story. It would make the plot more complicated as Ron, being the hot-headed male he is, drool over Harry. Of course, you can portray that any way you choose, if you decide to go ahead with that. It'll certainly be exciting to see how everything plays out!
I think the Bill and Harry interaction in this chapter was really cute and very well done... and Harry giggling his boobs in the mirror is totally what a teenager would do! :D I think bringing Fleur in woud be super interesting, by the way. Anyway, very good. Can't wait for more!
And yay for Slytherin!Bill! It was nice to see Severus interact so well with Bill. So many people make him be in a rage all of the time. I like how you've let him show that he can be reasonable. Poor Harry. Not only a terribly painful transformation--he must have felt like he was regrowing all of his bones under Skelegrow, except it was everything changing--but now a totally unavoidable identity crisis. Obviously a new name will be chosen. Just, please, don't make it Harriet. That is just a little bit too obvious. Keep up the great work, and do, please, keep Bill stopping by. I like how he and Severus got along in this chapter very much! Author's Response: Definitely not Harriet, but you have to wait until chapter six to find out. Thank you so much for the review, this is so fun! |
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