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Title: December 15: ~I’ll Be Home For Christmas~ 02 Apr 2012 10:39 pm
Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Severus narrowed his eyes at the boy. The little con artist.

    “I still haven’t a clue why that idiotic Sorting Hat placed you in Gryffindor. The only thing that even points you towards that house is the fact that you needlessly put your life in danger on a yearly basis, yet always seem to make it seem like you had no other choice. You, child, are a snake in hiding.”

    “So, is that a yes?”

    ~

    Nice! The interaction between Harry and Snape in this chapter is really believable. These two could have walked straight in from cannon, personality-wise, but of course they have a long, close relationship holding them together, so it makes for an interesting combo :) Also, I like that Harry is convincingly 15. That is something that all of us have a hard time pulling-off, I think. I know that I do.

    This is a lot of fun to read!

    Author's Response: Aw! Thanks so much! I just randomly looked to see if I had any new reviews and you sent me so many! Excitement for me! Thanks! 

Title: December 15: ~I’ll Be Home For Christmas~ 18 Dec 2011 3:03 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yup, Harry is not starting holiday off very well! LOL

    Onto the next chapter.

    I wonder what's bothering Harry. You capture both Harry and Snape perfectly.
Title: December 15: ~I’ll Be Home For Christmas~ 18 Dec 2011 4:37 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor Harry...I wonder what he got into this time...
Title: December 15: ~I’ll Be Home For Christmas~ 16 Dec 2011 6:57 am
Reviewer: silver-slytherin65 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, love Sev in this. Also like when he calls Harry Harrison... I bet Harry is gonna give his dad a lot of gray hairs in the next few years.

    Author's Response: Thanks! And you are probably right lol!
Title: December 15: ~I’ll Be Home For Christmas~ 16 Dec 2011 6:15 am
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Really like the plot, and where this is going! Can't wait for the next update! Nothing like a good ol' Harry and Snape family fic to get you in the Christmas spirit!

    Author's Response: Thanks!=) I may put out the next chapter today because I am going to be out of town tomorrow... The rest I will put out once a day. I hope this is how you wanted or envisioned the challenge to go... I have all the songs picked out and the plot until the twelfth and final day. I am really excited about this challenge=)

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