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Reviews For Twelve Days of Christmas
Severus narrowed his eyes at the boy. The little con artist. “I still haven’t a clue why that idiotic Sorting Hat placed you in Gryffindor. The only thing that even points you towards that house is the fact that you needlessly put your life in danger on a yearly basis, yet always seem to make it seem like you had no other choice. You, child, are a snake in hiding.” “So, is that a yes?” ~ Nice! The interaction between Harry and Snape in this chapter is really believable. These two could have walked straight in from cannon, personality-wise, but of course they have a long, close relationship holding them together, so it makes for an interesting combo :) Also, I like that Harry is convincingly 15. That is something that all of us have a hard time pulling-off, I think. I know that I do. This is a lot of fun to read!
Onto the next chapter. I wonder what's bothering Harry. You capture both Harry and Snape perfectly.
Author's Response: Thanks! And you are probably right lol!
Author's Response: Thanks!=) I may put out the next chapter today because I am going to be out of town tomorrow... The rest I will put out once a day. I hope this is how you wanted or envisioned the challenge to go... I have all the songs picked out and the plot until the twelfth and final day. I am really excited about this challenge=) |
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