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Reviews For Twelve Days of Christmas
I am really enjoying reading surly teenager Harry. They are just such a normal father and son for once :) Well, as normal as you can get for Harry Potter! I like the journal idea! Harry's letter is really quite adorable. Also, I love Albus as Santa :) This story is making my day quite happy so far. Nothing like waking up to a good fic. :)
Severus narrowed his eyes at the boy. The little con artist. “I still haven’t a clue why that idiotic Sorting Hat placed you in Gryffindor. The only thing that even points you towards that house is the fact that you needlessly put your life in danger on a yearly basis, yet always seem to make it seem like you had no other choice. You, child, are a snake in hiding.” “So, is that a yes?” ~ Nice! The interaction between Harry and Snape in this chapter is really believable. These two could have walked straight in from cannon, personality-wise, but of course they have a long, close relationship holding them together, so it makes for an interesting combo :) Also, I like that Harry is convincingly 15. That is something that all of us have a hard time pulling-off, I think. I know that I do. This is a lot of fun to read!
Author's Response: Thanks! There is a sequel oneshot on here too... I just can't figure out how to put them together as a series. :s
Author's Response: Thanks! I have a sequel of sorts written... It's a oneshot. I just don't have any Internet except on my phone right now to post. I am hoping it will be up Wednesday.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on a sequel of sorts to this story bc I realized that not everyone's questions were answered... It will be entitled, "What Happened To Umbridge?" ;) hopefully, I will Have it posted soon.
Little Lily sounds adorable. Hope you had a great Christmas and New Year. Author's Response: Thanks, Pandora! I am working on a oneshot that will be a sort of sequel to this.. "What Happened To Umbridge?" ;)
And it was a wonderful and sweet ending! Please keep on writing!
But very very cute! Author's Response: Lol probably. I was tired when I finished writing, so I was too lazy to proof read it. I know. I should be ashamed. Lol thank you for reading my story:) I'm working on a "what happened to Umbridge" story and hopefully the Internet will work long enough to post it within the next few days. |
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