Oh, whoa... That kinda made my hair stand on end, although Harry is obviously quite alive and well now! Fascinating start-- can't wait to see what you have in store! Loved the floating 4-year-old and the reference to caterwauling carolers! (Confundus through the keyhole--HA!) And so cute that Severus helped decorate the biscuits-- shows a good relationship between them!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it! I think the fact that he's not constantly observed by hundreds of students allowed Snape to be more relaxed and drop the "evil bat" persona once in a while... and of course Harry helped a lot, simply by being himself! Actually, I was tempted to include floating Harry in an extra scene... I could just see him all eager to help and creating chaos in the process!
Thank you very much for reviewing!