| Title: Soul Searched
| 25 Dec 2015 7:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you, love how Tim relates to the others
Oh this is getting so interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next. The conversations between Tim and Severus are really well done too!
This chapter is amazing. I can't wait to see if Phoebe manages to do something with the situation.
| Title: Soul Searched
| 29 Dec 2012 2:39 am
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| Reviewer: Lou (Anonymous)
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Please don't leave me here on the edge of a cliff! I love your story - it is amazing finding out more about Severus, Harry and Tim :) Thanks so much for brightening my day!
| Title: Soul Searched
| 29 Dec 2012 12:22 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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"Severus had wondered how much the Dumbledore knew"
--Dumbledore is not a title, so the 'the' in front seems weird.
--And I shake my fist at you for the cliff-hanger. Because I like the story and want to know what happens next.
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