Oh this is getting so interesting, I can't wait to see what happens next. The conversations between Tim and Severus are really well done too!
This chapter is amazing. I can't wait to see if Phoebe manages to do something with the situation.
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| 29 Dec 2012 2:39 am
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| Reviewer: Lou (Anonymous)
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Please don't leave me here on the edge of a cliff! I love your story - it is amazing finding out more about Severus, Harry and Tim :) Thanks so much for brightening my day!
| Title: Soul Searched
| 29 Dec 2012 12:22 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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"Severus had wondered how much the Dumbledore knew"
--Dumbledore is not a title, so the 'the' in front seems weird.
--And I shake my fist at you for the cliff-hanger. Because I like the story and want to know what happens next.
I'm a follower of your Digging for the Bones and found this one in the Recent update, I read the ones before this one and now I'm hooked :D Please keep up the awesome job!
Another lovely chapter. Perhaps we might have another one before Christmas?
I truly enjoyed this chapter, especially the bit about Snape coming to see Alice. Very kind indeed. Please update again soon!
I especially enjoyed this chapter. The dinner discussion was so interesting. I liked that Neville had decided to speak about Snape's part in the war. It was nice to have Alice in the story and her story about Snape visiting her in the hospital and what he said were poignant. I'll be interested in Severus' reaction to the dinner.
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