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Reviews For Unexpected
I like the idea that the kind of werewolf that Harry has become has at least a bit of control when the moon isn't directly on him. That's intriguing, and makes for a more interesting idea than the "standard" Potterverse werewolf trope. I look forward to seeing how Harry copes with the next two nights; how Ron deals with this new knowledge (please don't make Ron a real jerk about things in this story--I get tired of reading fics where Ron is written that way; and what happens when Snape finds out about all this. In regards to the last, I wouldn't be surprised to have Snape immediately blame Remus for it all... I look forward to the next chapter and the rest of the story. Thanks for giving us a new perspective on the Wizarding World! Well done!
Looks promising Author's Response: Not an alpha, but Harry knew enough at least to be submissive when a larger, stronger Were was on top of him.
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