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Reviews For Unexpected
Wow! How the hell is Ethan? And who changed him? Who's the hunter? Why's Ethan so tightlipped??? ARgh, you got me bleeding for an update :) Author's Response: Remember that Ethan said he was born that way, so both of his parents were weres. Nobody bit Ethan. And you'll get to see the hunter soon. The alpha will come later.
Great chapter too. I think that this has quickly become one of my favourite stories of yours. I can't wait to see Snape's role in the story, and I'm more and more curious about "Ethan's" role too. I can't wait to see what happens at school and I wonder how Harry is going to control himself.
I like the idea that the kind of werewolf that Harry has become has at least a bit of control when the moon isn't directly on him. That's intriguing, and makes for a more interesting idea than the "standard" Potterverse werewolf trope. I look forward to seeing how Harry copes with the next two nights; how Ron deals with this new knowledge (please don't make Ron a real jerk about things in this story--I get tired of reading fics where Ron is written that way; and what happens when Snape finds out about all this. In regards to the last, I wouldn't be surprised to have Snape immediately blame Remus for it all... I look forward to the next chapter and the rest of the story. Thanks for giving us a new perspective on the Wizarding World! Well done!
Looks promising Author's Response: Not an alpha, but Harry knew enough at least to be submissive when a larger, stronger Were was on top of him.
Great job. Really intriguing story. I did get scared there that Harry would hurt the Weasleys. Author's Response: Chapter four will be mostly just Harry again. It's looking like Severus will be in chapter five onwards. Don't worry about him not playing a large role. There are some things Harry will discover about Snape that will shock and surprise him. |
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