Wow, amazing start to your story! I’ve read this story several times, but am still struck by how compelling it is from the onset. Simply marvelous.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 05 Feb 2020 10:19 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter and exciting story thank you
That's it! I don't know how you do it - oh alright, of course I do - but you've hooked me again. How the hell I'm supposed to get any work done, I just don't know. Haha...can you see through my acting skills yet?
Darn, but you're good :)
Wow, holy cow! Awesome story idea! Great beginning. And what a fabulously cruel way to end the chapter!
One of the best beginnings to any fan fiction story I've ever read, and I've read a LOT! I was so happy to see that you've started a new story, I love how you write :)
Interesting start, and it looks as though things could get nicely complicated.
Wow! What a fantastic beginning!
And a perfectly timed cliffhanger ending!
I'll need more time to digest this, but I just had to tell you that you had me riveted to the computer screen with every word. I don't think that I've ever seen a fic where Harry (and Severus) went back in time from this particular point in canon. It looks to be an intriguing and exciting ride!
Well done!
Ooh, intriguing start. I'm anxious to see where you go with this story.
I love this idea.
I love that you write so long chapters.
And I love your great writing skills so your stories are so well written.
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