The dialogue is excellent - sarcastic, witty, and fresh yet familiar. This chapter was as gripping as the last.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 05 Feb 2020 4:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love their interaction and the sarcastic banter. Great chapter thank you
...and that's the least of what you owe him, Harry.
Trust Snape to find humor in this, huh
I am really enjoying this story Oliver. I love how Harry and Snape are working together and Harry is his small eleven-year-old self, but still has his eighteen-year-old memories.
Great job.
Whatever you say Sev. I love your stories, they make me smile. I don't know how in the world you manage to forge, I don't want to say fluffy feelings but rather.... good feelings around those two when it seems that they are just sniping at each other; but somehow you do. And it's wonderful!
I started laughing when Severus started acting, probably unknowingly, very paternal by telling Harry to wait until the weekend and Harry for jokingly calling Severus father. I love the fact you add little muggle things that one would notice to show Sev's muggle heritage (like the watch and the clock). It makes him you know? When you go back through the books a second or third time, you realize the signs were there that he had some muggle background, but they were so subtle it was overlooked originally.
Anyhow great story, looking forward to more!
PS- Are they ever going to lay off the last names? And will they ever go back to their own time or is it as I suspect Severus fears, they are stuck back in time?
Ahh this has been amazing so far! :) I like that harry still acts like the 18 year old that he is and that professor snape is still strict... they keep their same characters even going back in time! Can't wait for more, please update soon! Im hoping this fic will be a long one! ;)
very good. i throughly enjoyed this fic. keep it up!
Very nice scene in the Chamber of Secrets. My only question is, now that Harry's woken the Basilsk, what's to keep it down there and not getting up into the school to kill and petrify people?
I liked Severus' warning that he could still take points for disrespect. *grin*
I look forward to more chapters! Well done!
Author's Response: You'll see what happens to the Basilisk in the next chapter. ;)
Oh wow! This seems like a really fun story. Can't wait for more.
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