This is amazing. I love the whole set up to this story, as well as the small touches. Hot meals, familiar beds, and hot showers carry such weight now, knowing how long they weren’t a reality for Snape and Harry. It’s beautiful that you’ve highlighted these small, but important, aspects. Your writing is brilliant.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 05 Feb 2020 5:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Poor Harry I wonder what he will do with this information. Thank you a great chapter
I love the inventiveness of this.
I was apalled that Harry hadnt remembered Sirius. Finally he did. Hooray! It is not a complaint about your writing! I am glad your characters are not perfect. Nice story
Great chapter, Sneaky Slytherin Snape :)
Oh I love this story. The concept is fantastic. Thanks for leaving us on a cliff ;) can't wait to find out where you're taking us.
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Just figuring that out now Harry aren't you? So what happens now? Does Harry go back to the Dursleys or not?
Awwww. Awesome chapter of course. But...I want mooooore
Excellent story! Love it!
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