Beautiful and touching chapter, Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 06 Feb 2020 5:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic ending to the war thank you
So glad you kept Mrs Weasley as the Bellatrix slayer - I've always loved that part.
Wow! Brilliant end that is not the end as there is another chapter left. I really liked the part about the cot and everything still being there making it more real that they changed the past. Well, I'm off to the next, great work you did there.
Your Melfis.
Please update again soon, I really really enjoyed this. Harry calling Snape Dad was the moment I was waiting for!
Great chapter again! Loved the bits with harry caring for snape, calling him dad, etc. Really well done! So sad it's almost done!
Love love love the chapter. Brilliant!
I'm in love. I don't care if it takes you two or three months to write, I know it'll be worth it!
This was by far one of my favourite chapters. I loved every bit of it. Especially the bit in the Gaunt shack where Harry asked Snape if he might've been his dad.
I've loved seeing these characters change. The pub scene was both cute and amusing. The old regulars in local pubs can be so entertaining.
It was so gut wrenching when Harry realised that people had still died. I just wanted to hug him.
I liked that the army cot and blanket were there for Harry. That's one of the things I love about your writing. You add these little touches that mean so much. I've always thought that, in writing, less is often more and you really prove that with every chapter.
Thanks for another wonderful chapter. :)
Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
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