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Reviews For To Recollect the Future
I felt so horrid for that, but the thought of Harry spending the whole summer with Sirius instead of Severus wasn't what I wanted. xD I'm such an awful person :3 still, great story, loved it a lot!
As I've come to expect from you, you weave an intricate tale that just resonates with simplicity. Does that make sense?? Probably not - but I know what I mean. For me, a story is made through characterisation; through creating believable people that touch something inside me - people that I care about. I've always felt that Harry and Severus had so much in common, yet neither could see their similarities. So often in fanfic, they almost become charicatures of themselves as writers seek to accentuate their circumstances and flaws. Harry becomes this pathetic victim and Severus a bitter and twisted monster with not a single redeeming feature. You don't do that! What's particularly wonderful about this story is the idea that Severus could take an 11 year old Harry seriously - even knowing that he was actually an adult - and work so effectively *with* him toward their common goal. Thank you for that :)
Thanks for sharing! V
You cannot imagine how happy I am that Severus actually adopts Harry. they were sooo cute... and the second to last sentence (Harry... drool...) absolutely made my evening!! I'm gouing to miss this story, your Melfis. |
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