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Title: Chapter 11 06 Jan 2014 10:52 pm
Reviewer: Kyoko (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautiful! Is it mean that I was actually glad when Harry and Severus returned to their own world where Sirius was dead?
    I felt so horrid for that, but the thought of Harry spending the whole summer with Sirius instead of Severus wasn't what I wanted. xD I'm such an awful person :3

    still, great story, loved it a lot!
Title: Chapter 11 23 Nov 2013 7:55 pm
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent story
Title: Chapter 11 14 Mar 2013 8:41 am
Reviewer: thegirlinthewindow (Signed) [Report This]
    A really great story, and I love the ending even though I was at first disappointed that they didn't stay in the past/alternate universe. This ending is perfect.
Title: Chapter 11 30 Dec 2012 1:06 pm
Reviewer: txn (Signed) [Report This]
    Another excellent adventure.
Title: Chapter 11 31 Oct 2012 7:26 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful wonderful wonderful.

    As I've come to expect from you, you weave an intricate tale that just resonates with simplicity. Does that make sense?? Probably not - but I know what I mean.

    For me, a story is made through characterisation; through creating believable people that touch something inside me - people that I care about.
    I've always felt that Harry and Severus had so much in common, yet neither could see their similarities. So often in fanfic, they almost become charicatures of themselves as writers seek to accentuate their circumstances and flaws. Harry becomes this pathetic victim and Severus a bitter and twisted monster with not a single redeeming feature.

    You don't do that!
    What's particularly wonderful about this story is the idea that Severus could take an 11 year old Harry seriously - even knowing that he was actually an adult - and work so effectively *with* him toward their common goal.

    Thank you for that :)
Title: Chapter 11 30 Oct 2012 4:30 pm
Reviewer: the other witch (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. Loved it.
Title: Chapter 11 08 May 2012 7:33 am
Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Signed) [Report This]
    Great tale. I especially enjoyed how different it was from many of the time travel tales out there.
Title: Chapter 11 29 Feb 2012 12:35 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a wonderful tory and a great ending
Title: Chapter 11 28 Feb 2012 3:13 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely Wonderful. Read it in 1 go as I somehow missed it in progress. (dealing with the flu will do that to a person's observation skills)

    Thanks for sharing!
    V
Title: Chapter 11 27 Feb 2012 12:43 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Great fanfic!! Thank you for the many entertaining hours I've had while reading it.
    You cannot imagine how happy I am that Severus actually adopts Harry. they were sooo cute... and the second to last sentence (Harry... drool...) absolutely made my evening!!
    I'm gouing to miss this story, your Melfis.

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