Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 11 27 Feb 2012 12:43 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Great fanfic!! Thank you for the many entertaining hours I've had while reading it.
    You cannot imagine how happy I am that Severus actually adopts Harry. they were sooo cute... and the second to last sentence (Harry... drool...) absolutely made my evening!!
    I'm gouing to miss this story, your Melfis.
Title: Chapter 10 27 Feb 2012 12:13 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Brilliant end that is not the end as there is another chapter left. I really liked the part about the cot and everything still being there making it more real that they changed the past. Well, I'm off to the next, great work you did there.
    Your Melfis.
Title: Chapter 11 26 Feb 2012 4:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. Sorry to see it end, but I enjoyed it very much and I love that Snape is going to adopt Harry. Too bad that it wasn't when he was eleven.

    Maybe a sequel? Or side stories?
Title: Chapter 11 26 Feb 2012 7:45 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    "If you tell me you plan to run for Minister of Magic, I will personally have you committed."

    *guffaws*

    I think Minerva should have said, "It'll be a start."

    As for the last little bit - *squee!!!* I loves you!

    Author's Response:

    Fixed. I always miss *something.*

     Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 11 26 Feb 2012 5:30 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    "Papers still in hand, he turned to go to his own room, picking up a quill from the desk along the way."

    Lovely way to end such a wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading this. I enjoy the small things you show that makes us/Snape think of Harry, like his shoes in the corner.

    Because I'm greedy, I hope you write another new story soon. But since you're busy, I will tide myself over by checking out some of your other stuff I've never read.

    Thanks for writing another great story to share with us. You're awesome. :)
Title: Chapter 11 26 Feb 2012 4:29 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was darling! Any chance of a small sequel just to tell us what happens when Harry is "adopted?" The last few paragraphs definitely set the tone!
Title: Chapter 11 26 Feb 2012 4:26 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww...is this the absolute end? No sequel or follow up one shot?

    This was an amazing story and I'm sad to see it go, I really enjoyed every chapter. Please keep on writing, I look forward to more!
Title: Chapter 11 26 Feb 2012 3:59 am
Reviewer: RosieLB (Signed) [Report This]
    Nope. Sorry. I'm afraid you'll have to provide more stories about Harry and Severus.

    ;-)

    In all seriousness - I
Title: Chapter 11 26 Feb 2012 3:35 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    great story!!!!
Title: Chapter 11 26 Feb 2012 2:53 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome story!!!

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