Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 9 15 Feb 2012 8:44 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this was an absolutely brilliant chap!!! The whole cut of the horcrux thing was ingenious and I read the paragraph about Snape picking Harry up and putting him to bed trice because it was so cute and simply wonderful.
    I loved the idea of the talk between Harry and Petunia. It ´was multi layered and bittersweet. or in other words: great!!
    If you are wondering why I haven't reviewed the other chaps in between, as soon as my exams are over I will take the time to review each and every one, because, Merlin, your story deserves it!!
    Thank you for writing such a wonderful story so far, I cannot wait for more although I have to suspect that it is nearing its end. ;___;
    Yours sincerely, Melfis
Title: Chapter 9 15 Feb 2012 6:42 am
Reviewer: twilight1987 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am curious... How long do you plan this story to be? It feels like it is close to ending now that there is only one horcrux left.... That makes me very sad to think it may nearly be over!

    This chapter was awesome! Though if I had been Harry I probably would have passed out way sooner! And... Seriously, does Petunia have not one ounce of heart? Well, I know she doesn't, but good grief that woman is a hag!

    Again, this chapter... Like all of you chapter... Was fantastic! I can't wait to see what is going to happen next!:)
Title: Chapter 9 15 Feb 2012 4:26 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I enjoyed this chapter very much please update soon!
Title: Chapter 9 15 Feb 2012 3:11 am
Reviewer: ds862 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter... I really liked snapes compassion in the journal, and I like how as a writer you had the tear marks on the paper. I Like how it will impact the closeness between the two and open harry up a bit more.

    Love this story! Thanks for writing!
Title: Chapter 9 15 Feb 2012 2:50 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    That's not a cliffhanger . . . at least not in the sense that I write them as. *grins evilly*

    And I wonder what Sev almost said . . .
Title: Chapter 9 15 Feb 2012 2:27 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    .....He left four words, four scratchings of the plainest truth in his life, either times of them.

    "This was my home.".....

    Oh wow. That line really hit me for some reason. I love it. For only four little words, they certainly are moving.

    The way Harry is experiencing everything over again, yet in a different way, is so interesting. It's bad enough to know deep down that your family, or those who should care for you, don't at all. It hurts even more to have them so clearly let you know.

    I always enjoy your stories. The emotions, thoughts, and changes in relationships are so subtle. It makes the characters and their lives so much more real.

    This was another good chapter and, as always, I am eagerly awaiting the next one.
Title: Chapter 9 15 Feb 2012 2:25 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    That just might have been the best chapter you've written thus far!!!!
Title: Chapter 8 13 Feb 2012 2:23 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    Will it work? And what will happen next?
Title: Chapter 8 12 Feb 2012 5:03 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed this chapter and the way you're developing the relationship between Harry and Snape. It's funny, sometimes they come across as their true age and other times, it's like Harry really is only eleven,

    I'm very curious to see what will happen with Harry's scar and if all will go according to plan. Thanks for the chapter! :)
Title: Chapter 8 12 Feb 2012 5:00 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh man! Drum roll is seriously need here! Please update soon, I enjoyed this chapter!

    And I was wondering...will there relationship progress to that of father and son anything? Not soon but something in the future? (I hope so!)

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