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Title: Chapter 2 24 Feb 2015 8:40 pm
Reviewer: sshpfanfiction (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the premise of this story. I do find Severus, Harry and Draco all to be a little out of character though.

    I do believe that Severus would care for Harry in a situation like this, but I don't necessarily think he would be so willing to take him in initially, nor do I think he'd know how to act around Harry (or any hurt child).

    I also find a Draco Harry friendship to be implausible, especially with Harry being disabled. To be fair though, a lot of people like Draco and I'm not one of those people.

    Anyways, not trying to be overly negative. I do enjoy the premise and the attention to the practical details of Harry's injury. Thanks for writing.
Title: Chapter 8 23 Feb 2015 4:47 am
Reviewer: A Person on the Internet (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool! I'd been looking for a story that showed Draco in a more positive light without being slash, 'cause nobody but Voldemort is completely bad. I also like how you portrayed Draco's home situation, which could actually have happened in canon. Liking it so far!
Title: Chapter 24 17 Feb 2015 10:24 pm
Reviewer: ravenhaired88 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! So excited to see more.

Title: Chapter 24 16 Feb 2015 10:22 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter as usual!
Title: Chapter 23 16 Feb 2015 10:12 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the family you are creating here. I don't find Harry OC as he is so brave!
Title: Chapter 8 14 Feb 2015 4:15 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see that, in spite of adopting two 11-year-old boys, Severus as retained his snark. Of course with everything on his shoulders now, it probably did him some good to be able to take out his frustrations on a couple of students.
Title: Chapter 6 14 Feb 2015 3:56 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Minerva was let into the secret about Harry/Evan. She should be a good ally.
Title: Chapter 5 14 Feb 2015 3:46 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    That must have been a long and terrifying day for Harry. At least he has already made friends with Ron and Draco and Severus will be taking care of him. I hope Harry manages to sleep through the night. They don't want him to wake up alone in a strange place.
Title: Chapter 4 14 Feb 2015 3:35 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    So Snape will end up with two little boys. That should be a shock to the staff and students.
Title: Chapter 3 14 Feb 2015 3:21 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    "Severus tried to push his conscience back into the box where it usually lived." What a wonderful sentence. Harry has destroyed any preconceived notions Severus may have held about him. I like your Harry. Even with his injuries, he sounds like a force to be reckoned with. He is already changing Draco.

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