I’m so glad that Severus is working to help Evan regain the use of all his senses. I’m looking forward to the haters finding out who Evan really is!
| Title: Chapter 8
| 23 Feb 2015 4:47 am
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| Reviewer: A Person on the Internet (Anonymous)
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Cool! I'd been looking for a story that showed Draco in a more positive light without being slash, 'cause nobody but Voldemort is completely bad. I also like how you portrayed Draco's home situation, which could actually have happened in canon. Liking it so far!
I'm glad to see that, in spite of adopting two 11-year-old boys, Severus as retained his snark. Of course with everything on his shoulders now, it probably did him some good to be able to take out his frustrations on a couple of students.
congrats to draco for standing up for evan
Oh, I really like this story so far! I have a soft spot for disabled!Harry stories, and yours is excellent. I like how you are balancing the story between Severus' POV and Draco's POV with Harry as the intersecting point between them.
I like the tension between Snape and Dumbledore, and the emerging trust between Severus and Minerva as they plan, along with Poppy, how best to help Harry get better.
And you've made Snape a caring man without losing the "Greasy Git of the Dungeons" personality when he's in class or dealing in the halls with the other students. :)
And I like the good technical aspects of your writing. I was not thrown out of the story by typos, grammar errors, or obviously missing words.
I do hope that you will be able to update this story, because I do want to know what happens next to Harry, Draco and Severus. You are doing a fantastic job on this tale and it is definitely going into my favorites, and I'll be recommending it to my friends.
Well done!
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