"Severus tried to push his conscience back into the box where it usually lived" - what a wonderful statement. I am looking forward to finding out how Harry manages at Hogwarts and whether some of his injuries can be healed.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 17 Feb 2012 1:04 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I have no idea how I missed this story it i o good without being sloppy. I agree with Severus about Dumbledore I have never forgiven him for not helping Harry. Thank you
Your updates are very fast! :)
| Title: Chapter 10
| 16 Feb 2012 7:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Very nice start, I really like the plot line so far. It IS going a bit slow for me, but I can see you are writing it nicely as is, so continue with that line of writing! (: Hope to see an update very soon!
Thanks for the quick update!
i love that he's found another friend!
Oh, I really like this story so far! I have a soft spot for disabled!Harry stories, and yours is excellent. I like how you are balancing the story between Severus' POV and Draco's POV with Harry as the intersecting point between them.
I like the tension between Snape and Dumbledore, and the emerging trust between Severus and Minerva as they plan, along with Poppy, how best to help Harry get better.
And you've made Snape a caring man without losing the "Greasy Git of the Dungeons" personality when he's in class or dealing in the halls with the other students. :)
And I like the good technical aspects of your writing. I was not thrown out of the story by typos, grammar errors, or obviously missing words.
I do hope that you will be able to update this story, because I do want to know what happens next to Harry, Draco and Severus. You are doing a fantastic job on this tale and it is definitely going into my favorites, and I'll be recommending it to my friends.
Well done!
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