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Reviews For Denial
I'm enjoying this very much! The pacing of the story feels just right, and both Snape and Harry are in character. Looking forward to more!
*snorts* Here's hoping! Great chapter!
Either way loved the chapter and felt Sev's pain!
Good chappie. Can't wait till tomorrow.
I like how slowly this story is progressing, with tiny steps forward and setbacks along the way. Just the way it would happen in real life, I expect. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: I'm glad you like the pace at which the story's progressing. One of my biggest worries about posting a chapter a day is that it would seem really slow and repetitive, but then hopefully I'll be able to show how their relationship progresses, how just one little thing each day can make a big difference overall. I was a little worried when I was writing a sulking Harry. But he is only thirteen in this story, and entitled to be a teenager. And the way I see his character in the third book, is that although he dislikes Snape, severely, he still has respect authority figures. I can't see him having a full shouting match with a teacher, that would come later in his character development, the summer after fourth year when Dumbledore leaves him in the dark all summer. At least, that's the way I see it. Thanks for reviewing! |
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