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Reviews For How We Fall
Author's Response: There's no need to worry about them ending up in Sirius' care again... trust me, there will be a big angsty moment with Dumbledore and Harry will take care of some things. Also there will be something very important involving Sirius at some point in the story and Harry and Draco will no longer have to worry about him.
I have a feeling that when Snape finally does get the details about what really happened to Harry after he sent Draco off on the broom, the professor is going to be eating a bit of crow concerning his assumptions about Harry. I look forward to the next chapter. I really would like to see what would happen if Sirius showed up at Hogwarts now. While I don't want to see Harry injured by Sirius again, it would certainly open Snape's eyes to just how toxic the relationship btween godfather and godson has become. And I do like your Draco. It's so nice to see him demonstrating compassion and a new, apparently honest friendship with Harry. I am rather appalled at Dumbledore for just dumping Draco at Grimmaud Place like he did. Not right at all. I think that Dumbledore needs to have Wizarding Social Services cite him for neglect and for putting the boys into a life threatening situation (and for more than once for Harry!). And Sirius Black needs to go back to Azkaban for what he's done to both boys, as far as I'm concerned. He's become a sociopath, and, in a way, I'm not surprised. In canon, he seems selfish and self-centered, too focused on what he wants. Yes, he broke out of Azkaban, but it wasn't to help Harry, it was to find Pettigrew. Even to the end of his life, Black never seemed to care that he'd nearly caused Severus to be murdered and that he'd put Remus at risk for execution. (In fact, I still don't understand how Remus could still be friends with Sirius after that!) I really want to see a confrontation between Snape and Black--of words, wands or fists--that would be good! Good luck on the future chapters. :) I'l be watching for them.
If Harry were to actually break down, I think I would like for Draco to find him and fetch Snape. And maybe, if Severus is still thinking this is all a fluke Draco could have a few choice words with his uncle to make him understand. That isn't to say that any positive development bewteen Harry and Snape has to be/ should be rushed. Weew, enough rambling on my part, your Melfis.
Author's Response: He is very angry, but at this point he's still taking things out on Harry in the form of denying him the attention he needs. I also don't believe in revenge, I dont' like reading stories or writing stories with revenge, so there will be none of that. It hasn't been written in yet, but Severus knows that Dumbledore will want this swept under the table. They still need Sirius for Order things. Severus knows this from personal experience already because he has openly shown his dislike for Sirius in the past and Dumbledore has told him to keep a lid on it so to speak.
Hope this helps! Thanks for reviewing. I will try to get more of Severu's thoughts about Sirius into the story. There will be ample opportunity for it!
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